All Comments on 'Camping with a Tease'

Looks like the story has some potential. But, I couldn't get over the fact that there were no names used. It completely distracted me from the scene.

Honestly sometimes names can be distracting and it gives the story something special when the writer can convey who's communicating at what point without using names. It's more difficult with more than two characters but. . . don't let it distract you. let yourself get pulled into the scene and don't worry about names cuz... in this instance... who needs them?

To the Author: Great job, loved it, am going to your page to see what else you've written.

Happy Writing!

please get yourself an editor to correct the little annoying things that distract from the story. Mixed tenses, missing apostrophes, etc. But the story has great potential!