Thanks for writing.
Your stories never cease in trapping my attention until the very end. I love them. Thank you so much.
please do a story about rafe findin nikki. please please please?????
I really enjoyed this as well as all of your writing. You are extremely gifted and I can only plead for more,more,more. I myself would love to see a Matthew story. I would like to see his tortured soul at ease and happy :) Thank you for the joy of a great story.
this a good story please cont.
I agree with another comment..I would love to read Nikki and Rafe's story. I would also like to read how Michael settles in as a member of his new family and maybe he can even find a love again.
I know this is supposed to be the conclusion but I loved this story - I want to see Matthew happy. I want him to find his mate & be at home with Kinlye, Christian, Rafe & Nicky
I also agree with the comments of wanting to know Rafe & Nicky's story
Changed the name of the stepbrother by accident from Daniel to David...? Or did I miss something?
Sorry to harp on small things, but the small detail drive me nuts. Why did the stepmother call her Kinlye Haverstone instead of Smalley?
This story was just as good the second time around. I wonder if you've given any thought to writing a sequel that focuses on Matthew and how he settles in with his new family? I think it would be wonderful to tell that story. Perhaps the reason he was dreaming of Kinlye is because she's supposed to help lead him to his true mate. It's just a thought, but that's definitely a story I'd like to read!
what abt Matthew?
I love your story. Please continue it with additional chapters.
Like others I'd like to see one or more sequels and or prequels.
It'd be fun to see how you account for Matthew's "soul mate" like dreams of Kinlye.
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