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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/10

Kinda dumb

She just..... woke up, in an alley, and decided she'd passed out?

All his fondling, carrying her to a secluded area to carefully undress her, rape her, and then carefully redress her only took ten minutes?

He took her virginity, and she didn't notice?

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by Anonymous07/11/10

kinda dumb?

It's FICTION, not a literary classic.

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by Wisdom_Seeker07/14/10

Not Bad

It was an alright story, although like a previous commentator mentioned, having her wake up and just think she passed out was a bit unrealistic. It may be fiction, but a good story should be plausible within the fiction. You could have her curious as to why she is sore/slimy in her nether regions, but have her write it off for some reason. You could use a drug that would leave her so dazed and confused that she doesn't even think about being sore there. You could think of something to increase the plausibility.

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by Anonymous07/29/10

i liked it

it was pretty good

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by Anonymous10/08/10

great idea

what a sexy plot line you have going on here. I'm a female and it got me off.

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by Anonymous10/25/10

Ten minutes

If I didn't have sex or masturbate for a week, I could be done fast, being turned on from the start, and the situation would be almost enough to get me off before the entrance. Most of the time could be devoted to the dressing.

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by Anonymous11/14/10

RIPOFF

This is plagiarism. This is the first chapter in the Raped! series. This guy is an ass.

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by Anonymous07/12/13

At least U had him leave her a tip

Rather nice fiction compared to the 3 girls that was grabbed in Cleveland and kept for years in the basement. Plan B onestep should reduce abortion 95 percent in America and planned parenthood could spend our money on live children instead of killing the most innocent of human life.

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