I never expected to feel sorry for the poor bugger, but the end of this tale is quite touching! Aside from the hot sex, this is actually kind of a sweet story..."poignant" might be a better word for what I'm feeling.
I must also say that I've noticed your rather dry humor in the telling of these stories, both in the digressions, and in the commentary on events in the story. I'm all for humor...in this case, it makes your stories "personable", and makes me want to believe they are more than fiction, even if they are. Nicely done!
English
magnifique'
very well done. As a Philly native I know the location well. The story will make for an interesting time next time I am there!
Can't argue with plot since....
...they were French! Not sure when you have someone as seemingly cultured as her yell out "cunt", (at any point) but good writing , thanks
Well I never!
I never expected to feel sorry for the poor bugger, but the end of this tale is quite touching! Aside from the hot sex, this is actually kind of a sweet story..."poignant" might be a better word for what I'm feeling.
I must also say that I've noticed your rather dry humor in the telling of these stories, both in the digressions, and in the commentary on events in the story. I'm all for humor...in this case, it makes your stories "personable", and makes me want to believe they are more than fiction, even if they are. Nicely done!
bittersweet
but realistic, and nicely written-loved the story, romantic and sexy, but a shame that it all had to end-thanks
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