That mixture of pain and wanton lust. The fear of pain but the tear of not getting satisfaction. It such a beautiful mixture. I almost wish i could keep away from your stories.
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Anonymous05/28/10
If…
If I could suspend all logical thought this might actually make sense. Since I cannot, it does not.
about your longterm editor/partner. It shows…Just one example, but a real clanger: "mouth opened to teeth-clenched rictus" . See what I mean? Many others besides, so get your partner back, or get someone else.
with the comments posted. A good story, but could have been edited with more panache and care. There are some excellent descriptions, but there is evidently backstory absent. Keep trying.
Wonderful story ... as usual, Scotsman. Love your mixture of inflicting pain, but showing the human side as well, always careful, however, to keep within the proper boundaries. And always ensuring that her pleasure has a place amidst her pain, seeking to take her to new heights, unexplored limits. Edited or not, the story is very descriptive and holds the reader captive, looking for more. Kudos.
this one got to me! It's been awhile since I've read a story that involved ginger root. The sex was rough, but not quite as dark/harsh. This one was different, maybe because it wasn't edited, but I liked this the best by far out of your BDSM stories.
Your BDSM stories always get to me, but this one is superb. I wish…oh, never mind. The way you respect the sub and yet you keep control like a good dom, and get off on the exchange of power. I like this very much.
I love the way your alter ego is humanely sadistic. He wants a lot, but his concern for his partner is always evident. So many BDSM stories are either terribly tame, on the one hand, or sociopathic, on the other hand. Thanks for treading the dirty-but-sane middle ground. :-)
English
Wow
Hot and nasty rough sex. I imagined I was her while I masterbated
Nice one Scotsman 69,
a heady mix of trust and brutal sex. Well up there with your best, even if you were flying solo here. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC
I wish
I had a woman like Minerva
Captured again
That mixture of pain and wanton lust. The fear of pain but the tear of not getting satisfaction. It such a beautiful mixture. I almost wish i could keep away from your stories.
If…
If I could suspend all logical thought this might actually make sense. Since I cannot, it does not.
A Pity
about your longterm editor/partner. It shows…Just one example, but a real clanger: "mouth opened to teeth-clenched rictus" . See what I mean? Many others besides, so get your partner back, or get someone else.
Agree
with the comments posted. A good story, but could have been edited with more panache and care. There are some excellent descriptions, but there is evidently backstory absent. Keep trying.
Great work
Wonderful story ... as usual, Scotsman. Love your mixture of inflicting pain, but showing the human side as well, always careful, however, to keep within the proper boundaries. And always ensuring that her pleasure has a place amidst her pain, seeking to take her to new heights, unexplored limits. Edited or not, the story is very descriptive and holds the reader captive, looking for more. Kudos.
You are the master...
at providing a view of pain and pleasure. This is just one of the many of your submissions that I enjoyed.
Okay...
this one got to me! It's been awhile since I've read a story that involved ginger root. The sex was rough, but not quite as dark/harsh. This one was different, maybe because it wasn't edited, but I liked this the best by far out of your BDSM stories.
You're the best!
Your BDSM stories always get to me, but this one is superb. I wish…oh, never mind. The way you respect the sub and yet you keep control like a good dom, and get off on the exchange of power. I like this very much.
Sad but true
This never had to be a figment of your imagination.
This and SO much more. All. Everything.
Excellent, as usual
I love the way your alter ego is humanely sadistic. He wants a lot, but his concern for his partner is always evident. So many BDSM stories are either terribly tame, on the one hand, or sociopathic, on the other hand. Thanks for treading the dirty-but-sane middle ground. :-)
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