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Great teaser
Love the start. Waiting for chapter 2
Too short, but
I do like your attitude regarding criticism; "If you can't say something nice....I hope you enjoy!" Most readers will be OK with this lifestyle. If it were the wife doing the discipline, however!
Good prelude but not enough....
to have posted.
Thanks for the feedback!
Thank you everone for the feedback...as for EspressoBolus....I love the stories as well, where the men are disciplined by their wives...however, as a submissive female, my turn on comes from a strong man delivering a sound spanking to deserving woman. :) However, maybe it's something I can look into for a future story. Thanks again everyone!
Great intro
This is a great intro... makes me want to read ch. 2... just what DID she do? great writing by the way.
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