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Pauline's Anniversary

byJust Plain Bob©
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by Anonymous

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by morris5305/27/10

Great!

Excellent Job!

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by Average_Writer05/27/10

Will the real JPB Step forward? Good story Bob.

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by DrPluton05/27/10

Good one!

I like that our protagonist didn't wimp out by accepting her actions or becoming a voyeur/cuck (those stories are gross).

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by bruce2205/27/10

Nice light meat....

Not a wimp!

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by mcwiii05/27/10

Just more JPB crap

Finally writes something where the husband doesn't suck the dick of the guy fucking his wife and? He can't finish the story! Have that problem with your partners Bob? Maybe thats why you spend so much time writing crap stories

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by jasonnh05/27/10

Good read

Nice little story. Of course the wife is an idiot and way over the top. The guy is a dope for forgetting about their anniversary. I guess I have to ask if you love someone as much as he said he did his wife HOW do you forget your anniversary plans? But her reaction was insane. The black guy was too stereotyped to be believable.

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by digdaddyrich05/27/10

Well done and well written

A fast moving and very interesting story. Well worth giving a read. Thanks

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by Pistolpackinpete05/27/10

At least you know it's a jpb story....

,,,,when the wife is that stupid and outrageous.

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by huedogg12/17/10

You should have kick her out the night before

burn her ass Bob

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by saratu03/21/11

NOT

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by DWornock07/05/11

This is a love/hate story.

I had to choose between giving it 1* because I hate it and 5***** because I love it and decided to rate it 5*****s.

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by jiminab08/17/11

Thank you Bob

I didn't read the story so I won't give it a score. I just wanted to thank you for the N... word warning in the intro. I'm a white guy but I hate that word and I think you use it too often. Regardles I like most of your stories and thank you for them. Jim

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by nwhaler11/13/11

@jiminab - you are on a fucking porn site and a word offends you?

If you don't want to be associated with a particular word or symbol or person , then you don't associate with it- it is hypocritical to expect someone else to not use a word when you do it all the time. Black folks use it all the time - I would therefore assume that they are not offended by it.

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by cantbuymy07/06/12

i love it

"please don't do this to us." damn that was funny. 5.

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by ythebadger10/07/12

Weak

with totally unbelieveable characters.

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by semofuncpl312/22/12

That's one way

to treat a stupid cheating cunt. Glad he had some balls.

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by Drbeamer333306/14/13

Enjoyed it

She got what she deserved. Thanks.

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by cantbuymy07/10/13

Cheating cunt looking for an excuse to cheat,

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by Drbeamer333307/28/13

One observation . . .

The first night at the club he didn't get a lap dance. That seems to be a significant oversight, especially seeing how seeing the lap dance was what sent her over the edge.

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by Overthefalls08/18/13

The old "jump to conclusions"

And the wife screwed up even though he didn't get the lap dance at first. Another slut wife from JPB. Funny stuff. Although once again, I would like to see the ending.

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by krosis66601/12/14

both

Are retards and Both deserved what they got. It is NOT OK to cheat. She is a hateful cheating cunt. He is just as bad. If you are married, then paying a strange naked woman to sit in your lap and have her rub her tits in your face is still cheating! What is the difference between getting a lap dance and a wife letting a stranger rub his cock all over her face in a bar parking lot? How would that make a husband feel? It's not OK just because you PAY for a lap dance.

Now don't get me wrong. There's nothing wrong with a lapdance. As long as you are single and not in a relationship. Once you commit to someone then extra 'fun' outside that relationship is cheating.

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by betrayedbylove01/14/14

Damn

Stupid fucking cunt. He was an asshole for forgetting the anniversary but she went to far. Divorce the cunt.

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by tazz31701/14/14

WELL IT WAS HER ANNIVERSARY TOO

and a woman scorned isn't to be trifled with. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tootight110/19/14

nice story

only one question, why were the neighbors clapping? how long was it really going on?

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by Anonymous12/13/14

Probably can't afford to play with the redhead

He needs to divorce the slut first and THEN play with the redhead. That way he's in the drivers seat for the divorce as she has committed adultery and he hasn't. Time to keep more of the assets in the divorce and throw her ass into the gutter. He should have sent her off with her black lover.

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