I could barely tell what you were trying to write with your numerous grammatical errors.
Plump women are sexy and they love to fuck (my perception)!
The story was more like a report for the head office than an erotic story.
However i read it because i crave plump women.
3 stars - keep on writing.
A difficult read. Sort of all over the place. Real potential for an engaging story with interesting characters, but it doesn't feel like much effort was put into it.
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