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Gathering Storm Ch. 03

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by Servo4205/30/10

Lighting Flashes

Another great read. Really starting the heat up now that the storm is apon then. I cant wait to see what happens next.

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by latin_lover05/30/10

Excellent

Very erotic, good job building anticipation and revealing the kinky nature of the relationship between mother and daughter. Looking forward to more

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by risler198705/31/10

Love it!

So far, so excellent. Reads like a highly charged, extremely erotic can't put it down mystery novel. You never disapoint. Keep up the extraordinary work; and I thank you a ton!

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by acgolf06/06/10

Have loved your writing

Disappointed to get this when I tried to advance to Ch. 04,

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