All Comments on 'CFNM: His First Time Ch. 01'

by OrdinaryGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More ! More !

Please keep this one going - i love it. Nicely written too.

MrKnowitallMrKnowitallalmost 14 years ago
The return...

I haven't read anything like this from you before, but your thoughts and style are as exciting as ever. It's a pleasure to read your words again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

wow, I like it. Keep going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
YESSS

You have me hooked (tethered?). Your writing is superb. Great start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Love it

This is hot. It makes me wish it were me pleasing her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Misplaced Genre! An OG[re] in waiting perhaps, for a masochist victim?

Extraordinary garbage; in that OG considers her thoughts beneficial to man!

Curious analysis of CFNM obsessions by a potential 'dominatrix' writer has served few regular readers of this unusual genre with a sadistic desire to inflict discouragement on mankind, crazy enough to pander to emotionally disturbed writers self-serving feminist fantasy diatribe. Please don't inflict reputational damage to smpathetic writers by penning such inappropriate pyschotic ideas? Might a older female writer suggest undertaking corrective councelling, should you feel inclined to continue to contribute similarly horrific chapters. This one failed to impress, barely receiving a 1score!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 14 years ago
Well-written

and very beautiful. I'm a dom but I switch for my partner's pleasure. Thank you for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Keep up this caliber of work

Whoever the one person was has to be a male afraid of what he wants deep in his soul. This has to be one of the most well written female domme stories I've read on this site

NudyDudeNudyDudeover 13 years ago
Begging for more

I love the beginning and hope you will be adding to this story. Reading to the ending I feel like the guy wondering what will happen next.

Bare Hugs

Nudy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I cant wait to read the next chapter For a time I was your slave I think that is what a story should do make you believe you are the chactor in the story as You did

honore56@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
My Submission

Wonderful story wish it had happened to me. I am ripe for training.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
oh yeah

I really liked that would love to read thg rest of the story

rbw65Xrbw65Xalmost 7 years ago
Beautiful story

This is a beautiful, we'll written story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Mildly interesting but routine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm almost eighty years old but I can still get it up with viagra. This story reminded me of serving my girlfriend who was into femdom. That was fifty-five years ago. All of the humiliating things in this story were things that happened to me for the two years we were together. More embarrassing was that she invited her girlfriends over to watch her dominate me and she required me to service them too. I masturbated and came reading this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Elegant...I would be happy to be yours

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