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CFNM: His First Time Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/15/10

More ! More !

Please keep this one going - i love it. Nicely written too.

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by MrKnowitall06/16/10

The return...

I haven't read anything like this from you before, but your thoughts and style are as exciting as ever. It's a pleasure to read your words again.

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by Anonymous06/16/10

wow, I like it. Keep going

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by Anonymous06/16/10

YESSS

You have me hooked (tethered?). Your writing is superb. Great start.

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by Anonymous06/16/10

Love it

This is hot. It makes me wish it were me pleasing her.

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by Anonymous06/16/10

Misplaced Genre! An OG[re] in waiting perhaps, for a masochist victim?

Extraordinary garbage; in that OG considers her thoughts beneficial to man!
Curious analysis of CFNM obsessions by a potential 'dominatrix' writer has served few regular readers of this unusual genre with a sadistic desire to inflict discouragement on mankind, crazy enough to pander to emotionally disturbed writers self-serving feminist fantasy diatribe. Please don't inflict reputational damage to smpathetic writers by penning such inappropriate pyschotic ideas? Might a older female writer suggest undertaking corrective councelling, should you feel inclined to continue to contribute similarly horrific chapters. This one failed to impress, barely receiving a 1score!

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by Scotsman6906/16/10

Well-written

and very beautiful. I'm a dom but I switch for my partner's pleasure. Thank you for this.

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by Anonymous11/06/10

Keep up this caliber of work

Whoever the one person was has to be a male afraid of what he wants deep in his soul. This has to be one of the most well written female domme stories I've read on this site

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by NudyDude11/08/10

Begging for more

I love the beginning and hope you will be adding to this story. Reading to the ending I feel like the guy wondering what will happen next.

Bare Hugs
Nudy

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by Anonymous02/16/11

I cant wait to read the next chapter For a time I was your slave I think that is what a story should do make you believe you are the chactor in the story as You did

honore56@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous02/11/13

My Submission

Wonderful story wish it had happened to me. I am ripe for training.

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by Anonymous06/02/15

oh yeah

I really liked that would love to read thg rest of the story

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by rbw65X05/17/17

Beautiful story

This is a beautiful, we'll written story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

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