This whole I love my husband but want to have sex with others is BS
You can not truely love someone and risk the hurt you would cause to be caught, nor in fact even do it.
In this story, wife doesnt really love him, so why keep her?
I DID give it 4 stars for being well-written and for his punishing her by limiting her dancing.
But as much as he presumably loves her, but after her cheating on him on Spring Break (and yes, it WAS cheating because they were exclusive!), and then goes off with this asshole and is so mesmerized by his cock that she FORGETS she's married?! TWICE????
If he's not going to throw her out, then HE should go to Spring Break without her and get some strange and let her see how it feels!
Her cheating was inexcusable, all her excuses were hollow...But he loved her and decided to believe her and forgive her...But as soon as he listened the call she had in her car, she would be out of the house...that not happening ruined this story...1*
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Anonymous10/25/15
he's an idiot
What kind of bitchass cuck takes the woman backafter she repearedly cheats and openly conspires to cheat again? Your stories are getting worse.
by
Anonymous01/27/16
what a crock
probably jpb the cucks auto bio.
amasing how he has a few good tales,,,but most are worth less than this one star tale.
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Anonymous02/29/16
That will teach her
No dancing! A country full of Donald Trumps all Bluster and No Balls! Americans the Earths practice joke
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Anonymous02/29/16
HEY ANNONY You asswipe
fuck you in the heart. America is the greatest country in the world and I bet you are one of those sucking her dry and trying to destroy her. So came and get some fag!! I'd be happy to cut your balls off!
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Anonymous02/29/16
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
for effort and content and to tell the asshole of LIT, dear annony to eat shit and die. gave you a 5 to help your score.
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Anonymous02/29/16
Gee Bob, you paint an interesting character in Shayna.
Let's see. She slept with a guy in Florida for a week, no less, while they were supposedly exclusive. After they were married, she then slept with another guy for an entire weekend, again no less, and after walking out on hubby in public with the man. He's still only been with her, and she's two up on him with lovers. Again, these betrayals weren't spur of the moment one night stands. Shayna is a pretty interesting character, and he's pretty stupid thinking that depriving her of other dance partners is real punishment. She'll be sheet dancing with another partner soon, and it would be interesting if you pursued that future. Well written story.
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Anonymous03/01/16
bonnietaylor
The only ASSHOLE on Lit is you. So shut the fuck up with your constant whining. Get over yourself. Nobody gives a shit about your lunatic ravings.
Stupid story, with a stupid cuckold without balls. Give me a break. 1*
She knew exactly what she was doing, MAYBE she had some sort of morbid fascination Friday night (though after Spring Break any curiosity should have been satisfied!), but once she woke up Saturday morning she should have been beating feat back to Josh and throwing herself at his feet!
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Anonymous04/26/16
What a Friggin Stupid Story
You've got the guy spending all his time checkng up on her to see if she's cheating.
they both should cut their losses and move on unless he likes to live in a state of power struggle and distrust.
All that happened here is that the husband got the upper hand. What kind of marriage or partnership is that?
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Anonymous08/11/16
Once a Cheater, Always a Cheater
Only one thing he should of done, DIVORCED her.
by
Anonymous09/18/16
Wouldnever let her in the house and would have started divorce papers.
I would never let her in the house and filed divorce papers when she was gone.
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Anonymous01/29/17
Well
Why keep her?
She will cheat against .
I mean abandoning your husband and spending a weekend away.
And her family friends and neighbors know it?
Why even try
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Anonymous01/29/17
5+
If annony the asshole of LIT hates a story in LW then it has to be great
I try to stay away from berating other commenters, but
Am I the only one who becomes annoyed at a commenter who writes an entire story in the comment section? I'm sorry, but that is cowardice. Write a story and post it. If you don't want backlash for it, turn off comments and voting.
I find that more irritating that trolling comments.
You are not alone. We had this one guy who used to post these micro stories where 'Tom' always fucked his wife and he always ran off and lived 'off the grid' in a tiny cabin, but they were perhaps a 1000 words. I liked them.
This behemoth is too long and I would delete it myself.
English
well
This whole I love my husband but want to have sex with others is BS
You can not truely love someone and risk the hurt you would cause to be caught, nor in fact even do it.
In this story, wife doesnt really love him, so why keep her?
But makes a great story.
Not Sure About This One
I DID give it 4 stars for being well-written and for his punishing her by limiting her dancing.
But as much as he presumably loves her, but after her cheating on him on Spring Break (and yes, it WAS cheating because they were exclusive!), and then goes off with this asshole and is so mesmerized by his cock that she FORGETS she's married?! TWICE????
If he's not going to throw her out, then HE should go to Spring Break without her and get some strange and let her see how it feels!
The cheating...
Her cheating was inexcusable, all her excuses were hollow...But he loved her and decided to believe her and forgive her...But as soon as he listened the call she had in her car, she would be out of the house...that not happening ruined this story...1*
he's an idiot
What kind of bitchass cuck takes the woman backafter she repearedly cheats and openly conspires to cheat again? Your stories are getting worse.
what a crock
probably jpb the cucks auto bio.
amasing how he has a few good tales,,,but most are worth less than this one star tale.
That will teach her
No dancing! A country full of Donald Trumps all Bluster and No Balls! Americans the Earths practice joke
HEY ANNONY You asswipe
fuck you in the heart. America is the greatest country in the world and I bet you are one of those sucking her dry and trying to destroy her. So came and get some fag!! I'd be happy to cut your balls off!
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
5
for effort and content and to tell the asshole of LIT, dear annony to eat shit and die. gave you a 5 to help your score.
Gee Bob, you paint an interesting character in Shayna.
Let's see. She slept with a guy in Florida for a week, no less, while they were supposedly exclusive. After they were married, she then slept with another guy for an entire weekend, again no less, and after walking out on hubby in public with the man. He's still only been with her, and she's two up on him with lovers. Again, these betrayals weren't spur of the moment one night stands. Shayna is a pretty interesting character, and he's pretty stupid thinking that depriving her of other dance partners is real punishment. She'll be sheet dancing with another partner soon, and it would be interesting if you pursued that future. Well written story.
bonnietaylor
The only ASSHOLE on Lit is you. So shut the fuck up with your constant whining. Get over yourself. Nobody gives a shit about your lunatic ravings.
Stupid story, with a stupid cuckold without balls. Give me a break. 1*
Trance?
I don't buy that "trance" excuse for a second!
She knew exactly what she was doing, MAYBE she had some sort of morbid fascination Friday night (though after Spring Break any curiosity should have been satisfied!), but once she woke up Saturday morning she should have been beating feat back to Josh and throwing herself at his feet!
What a Friggin Stupid Story
You've got the guy spending all his time checkng up on her to see if she's cheating.
Ugh...
Yuk
no marriage here. why prolong the agony?
they both should cut their losses and move on unless he likes to live in a state of power struggle and distrust.
All that happened here is that the husband got the upper hand. What kind of marriage or partnership is that?
Once a Cheater, Always a Cheater
Only one thing he should of done, DIVORCED her.
Wouldnever let her in the house and would have started divorce papers.
I would never let her in the house and filed divorce papers when she was gone.
Well
Why keep her?
She will cheat against .
I mean abandoning your husband and spending a weekend away.
And her family friends and neighbors know it?
Why even try
5+
If annony the asshole of LIT hates a story in LW then it has to be great
I try to stay away from berating other commenters, but
Am I the only one who becomes annoyed at a commenter who writes an entire story in the comment section? I'm sorry, but that is cowardice. Write a story and post it. If you don't want backlash for it, turn off comments and voting.
I find that more irritating that trolling comments.
Javmor
You are not alone. We had this one guy who used to post these micro stories where 'Tom' always fucked his wife and he always ran off and lived 'off the grid' in a tiny cabin, but they were perhaps a 1000 words. I liked them.
This behemoth is too long and I would delete it myself.
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