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Bravo
I liked it very much, have best piece of ass at home, hit where it hit the most, keep eyes on her, let her live in fear. She has to decide what she want loving husband sacrificing dance and freedom or without him. Only one flaw, you husband should start looking for another partner. and when he finds he can dump her, it wont hurt that much when you have partner by your side. And this is the only solution, because no-one should count on this type of relation, it is not going to last very long. When you have seen she is still looking for opportunity outside the marriage. And what about Tanya. Call Tanya and dump Shanya.
Trash
A one-night stand MAY be forgivable with the proper and honest remorse and an (honest) effort to prove her love and regret.
A several-day fuck fest with her admitted fascination with big cocks (and not the first time either) what makes him believe anything will ever change? She'll do it again at first given opportunity.
There is only ONE solution - DUMP HER. He is just setting himself up for another hurt.
Trust but verify is a good rule when there is trouble brewing but how do you live with a woman when you have to check her every move and every phone conversation? What will your thoughts be when she is late from work? Or shooping takes longer than usual? - This is a no-win situation.
Another hot story from the master
Well done Bob. The stories just keep coming, and are very interesting to read.
Thanks for the work.
Good story but mixed feelings about the result
I agree with YornH that trying to monitor a woman who is untrustworthy the rest of your life is not a way to live. Not only did she run off on the spur of the moment and stay gone all weekend but she was actively plotting to continue deceiving him. She is one treacherous bitch. He chooses to control her through fear of retribution. Is that really the relationship you want with your wife? Someone who is afraid of you will do what you want them to but they won't love you for it. Is it worthwhile to have a wife who only behaves because she is afraid you will hurt her? Doesn't sound like much of a relationship to me. On the other hand I loved the revenge aspects. Running him off the road was simplicity itself although visiting him in the hospital was a huge risk and could have caused the police to take a much closer look at the "accident". Also the restriction of her dancing was great. It really hit her exactly right. I love the phrase "You don't own me" because it implies I will do whatever I want. If someone is being unreasonable maybe it is deserved. However, she has shown twice that she doesn't care about him at all. Real love is impossible to park at the curb over the weekend while you are out screwing someone else. He now DOES own her because she proved she was not responsible to him like a wife and lover should be. Act stupid, pay the price. But again, not much of a way to live.
Hey...
He ran over the wrong person!
LOL
There is one true fact in life so many often overlook. When it comes to women, or even men, for that matter?
Dang near half of all the people we ever meet are either one, or the other.
So there really is no shortage of replacements.
Interesting take on revenge, then almost acceptance.
MGM
so he takes the wife back AFTER he finds out she cheated on him a 2nd time?
this may be the stupidest story JB has ever written
Women get raped and kidnapled and killed from bars all the time. While she has disappeared for 3-4 days she never calls. She never calls a friend or family.
It nevers occurs to her how cruel and extremly unsettling her disapperance is to her so called super wimp husband... and of course JPB never raises THAT issue...
But wait it gets even worse!!! LOL.... ROTFLOL....
After the missing 3 days she coms home... and is "confessing" and trying to explain that she has this BCF thing ( big cock fantasy)... he learns that this is the SECOND TIME she has done this to him...
SO... after finding out that his cunt whore wiofe is actually MUCH worse than even he thought.... the husband has only one option
He takes her back . Sure..makes perfect sense.....
Not thrilled with the outcome
This story is somewhat similar to "Overwhelmed" by the Drifter (n SOL). That however is a much better story.
Interesting Tale
For me, the moment I heard the cell phone tape she would be out the door, though I kind of believe that the parting of the waters was that declaration about his not owning her back before th e Spring vacation, He really should
have gotten over her earlier, perhaps he and JPB are into domination, because she ended up without choices...
He wants to be her jailor?
Cause as YornH pointed out that is what he now is. Does he really want to live his life by guarding her 24/7? As the phone calls clearly show she is a liar and a cheat and has no intentions of changing. When he is not watching her she will find another big cock to screw. She has done it multiple times and has no intention of ever stopping on her own volution.
Thanks for sharing.
It's Erotic FICTION, People!
An excellent story as always, JPB.
For the other commenters; it's FICTION, people. It's a STORY. It didn't really happen, it isn't true-to-life. Enjoy the story for what it is. JPB has written hundreds of FICTIONAL sex-themed stories. They're all at least fairly decent, and many of them are outstanding. But only a few of them are based on real occurrences, and this ain't one of them.
So either enjoy the stories as stories, or stop reading them.
Jailor?
Well, mayibe. But he feels that he has built the jail strong enough that she cannot get out unless she divorces him or cheats. IFFFFFFF he is happy with it, and if he likes this kind of life, and if she wears him out in bed, then he should live the life he chooses. And he still verifies and she still knows what he will do next time. Yah, she is a liar and cheater and cannot never be trusted, but that is the package he chose and he certainly can dump that package anytime he wants: he is is the jailor and holds all the keys, except maybe for the ones on the ring that the dog has in his mouth, oh, sorry , wrong story.
Something's missing
Why would he allow her back into his life? I guess there are men who have self esteem low enough to accept a woman who cheats and confesses/gets caught. But one who plans to keep doing it? One who sets him up to be lied to, cheated on again and again? Maybe running them both off the road would have been a better idea.
Oh yea, JPB is consistent as hell with another wimp male character taking back the slut once again!
Yep, it is fiction [one-tracked male humiliation dog shit & always a self-centered slut wife] - credit given, JPB is consistent as always. But as TE_ stated, "Drifter's Overwhelmed" is a much better story with realistic ending.
Harry!....
While not everyone (just most) would agree that "anonymous" equals gutless faggot-Everyone does agree that the definition of insanity is trying the same thing over and over and expecting different results.Haven't you used up your lifetime allotment of ODAJPB? (Outrage Directed At).-At least Bob went with option 3b this time. He's only used that resolution 62 times, i.e., hardly at all. Personally I think it's hilarious the roadblocks to success jpb will try to railroad his protags through. (Marrying too young to a party girl size queen, does it get any tougher than that?)
Weak!!!!!!
And boring.
Burn the Bitch
I enjoy reading many of the writers on this site and JPB is among the top of my heap. However this story makes me a little mad. Why would he take the two timing bitch back when he has the car recordings where she planned to cheat again just to get a big cock. All I can say is she must be one hell of a good lay if he sees fit to keep her around. Fucked if I would. Just doesn't ring true.
Better than usual...
I always read your stuff and like some of it enough to be envious of your skill but I don't like your 'wimpy' stuff.
This was the best story of yours that I have read.
I love it when assholes - especially big dicked assholes (I don't consider my 71/2" - 8" on a very good day, as being by any means big), get their comeupance and the possibility of their pride and joy being disasterously reduced appeals to me. I would hope that I could find enough sympathetic friends to assist should the need arise - I know I could certainly find two.
Consider this offering your template for the future and you wont go wrong.
Keep up the good work.
Jim.
Just Pure Poop
You can not guard pussy.
Pretty Entertaining
and well written as usual. Of course, I would have just dumped her but then the story wouldn't have been very entertaining. Talk about your High Maintenance Woman, you would spend half your life keeping tabs on her and getting revenge. I guess there are worse ways of spending your free time. Thanks JPB for the laughs.
3*** rating for what is kind of a cute story.
However, JPB has gone off into La La Land with an impossible 10" cock that even a horse wouldn't have plus "He has a big cock; I can't help it; I have to have it."
A few women can't resist having sex with some men but huge cocks is never the reason.
good story good advice
my first wife turned out to be a cheating slut after 8 months of marriage and no there were no niggers with 11 inch cocks as big as a coke can. when i found out i did not tell her. that first night i told her to douch. she said fuck off so i said get out. i think she knew the jig was up. i fucked the bitch everywhich way for the last 2 months. after finishing her on a saturday afternoon she passed out long enough for me too move half the furniture out. don't ever put up with a cheating wife. kick her ass out!
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Not a very good revenge story.
It's hard to believe that the guy created here would put up with a continually unfaithful wife; especially one he knows is a sneaky lying person.
Why
You're an intelligent man - so why do you do this?
He doesn't accept her conduct when she left for Florida and eventually takes her back - I think with some trepidation but, he's horny and in love - okay...once!
She does the Friday night thing for the whole weekend and then when he allows her to talk she owns up to fucking a guy in Florida for a whole week. We all saw the pattern developing at the bar and now we know she is a repeat excuse maker and a cheat!
JPB, you wrote him as a no nonsense guy, he did all the things a jilted man would do and then you allowed him to have her back in the house?
Two different character Bob. I know you write for your own pleasure and don't care wether we agree or not but could you just stick to the character and personalities of the people you write about?
A PTDLCB ( park the dance loving, cheating bitch ) Revenge Story.LOL .
Revenge can assume many forms & this is one of the most unique . I love the story because the payback is so innocuous but effective. Why would he want to leave her ? He loves her first of all - if Shayna is dumped then the revenge is over.
A wimp in disguise.
A wimp in disguised. The wife got away too easily.
CLOSE THE DOORS AND CHANGE THE LOCKS
the dancing queen is on the prowl. TK U MLJ LV NV
Better revenge
His greater revenge would have been to divorce her and she could choice to live with Craigh or to look for others.........He listened to the car calls and he knew his wife would like to ride on 2 horsebacks on same time. Somebody who prefers to ride on 2 horseback the divorce is better revenge..........
More exactly
To divorce her after the hospital speech....................
not a wimp but a stupid fool
this is typical of the WACC husband mentality, she fucks some guy for three days, tells him it was the best sex of her life and now only wants to come home because she feel guilty and is sorry. And this husband is like most of the husbands on this site and 2/3rds of the commentors. Take her back because she made a mistake and she is human. Now ask the ladies, how many of you would take your husband back after he left you in a club wondering where he was, only to find out he was fucking some chick for three days? Maybe 2 out of 10, and 0 of 10 if there GF's have a say.
The only thing that's WHACK about this story is the critics who label the narrator of this story a WACC !
The narrator of the story made the cheaters pay a daunting price for their transgressions. He set up a alibi & executed with homicidal malice : violent revenge against the would be Lothario.
The Harley was smashed with dancing boy riding it along with serious bodily injuries. Where I come from, losing a 10-30 thousand dollar Hog is a high price to pay for three days worth of illicit ass, not to mention extensive hospital bills.
The narrator went to the hospital & chased him out of the state with the castration warning . The cheating wife is denied permanently the chance to dance with other men . Since Shayna lived to dance & it was one of her top 2 to three pleasures in life - this is severe . In short , the guy got payback and you don't want to fuck with him.
Of course the narrator is fictional but if he wasn't ... It would be best to have your health insurance premiums paid up before one called him a wimp ass cuckold. Not that the 99.9% of the Internet Hard Men critics here would have the balls to say that in real life.
since I'm the only one that used WACC, you must be refering to me
First I never called him a WACC so read my comment. I said he wasn't a wimp but he still has the WACC mentality. Why would you want to keep a slut that ran off to fuck some guy for three days. Not mention she was planning to do it again once she got back in good with her husband. So much for being sorry about it, also, so what she couldn't dance with other men. What a harsh punishment, what will he do if she has another man's baby, stop her from watching tv or going to the movies. Shiver, I'm soooooo scared. If anybody is being punished it him, for having to keep watch of his slut that has already proved she can't be trusted. So far as I'm concerned the only "whack" statement came from you, Glamdagg
What a different
In thecelt's story "Special Day", Molly became extrem loyal to Jim in that story, so the reconcilation was belivable succesful against here where the wife learnt from this event she should hide her future affairs from the husband more carefuly. The car mobil speach was the exact attention for him...............Sometime a woman is relative faithful, what means she has only 1-2 short time flings in her all life or in her first marriage only. A divorce could assist her to be better personality or a possibility for being better personality...........
I forgot
They have not got any common children................so the divorce is a easer possibility.
Great story moral conflict stupid love
The story illustrates the extreme stupidity of unconditional love. If you become judgmental, please define LOVE for us. We can pick and chose who we will fall in love with or to the extent we float away into the hysteria of its grips. Shayna obviously had jungle fever and slid down the slippery slope of lust. The concern I had was her cellphone conversations that reinforced her willingness to abort her loyalties to her marriage in favor of future lustful encounters. That should've cemented her fate but it didn't. The author gave us enough rope to hang us into a conscious awareness to the total wreckless abandon and hightails of sexual lust surrounding this moral dilemma. How much could you should you take to intellectually convince you of this obvious disastrous situation. What can a normal person do or should they do under these circumstances.
The love for eachother is there perhaps the burden of responsible behaviour is quite lopsided but nevertheless it is as good as it gets for these two. Perhaps the author had no intent on the intellectual or love slant with just focusing on the sexually exploitive nature of an unfaithful skank. It is infinite in the permutations of introspective analysis into some authors intent so perhaps we must just find something we can conveniently point at as are own hypothesis and go with it. Perhaps intellectualization into the behaviour of a skank is blatantly stupid or just perhaps unpopular.
The persistence of Shayna as the object if affection cannot be ignored anymore, Han a 500 pound gorilla in the room nor can her skanky proclivities. The wimp behavior of her husband ended with results that brought Shayna back in line. Perhaps, his lack of protectivenesss and exclusivity at the club should have been a firm prerequisite from the beginning lending itself to total avoidance of this whole mess.
In summary, the author brought to light the insecurity one feels in any living relationship that both parties can sense to one degree or another. Thanks author for the horny account of an unfaithful wife and the eventual accent of a wimp to manhood and the extent one is willing to go to keep his mate and protect their union.
Good story, but....
I'm not sure I'd want to stay married to a big cock slut. It would wear you down mentally to ALWAYS be worried about what she was doing. Nobody wants to live like that. Somewhere down the line there's a divorce coming.
Why
They were never meant to be together, you wrote that in the beginning - she was in a different crowd!
She leaves for a weekend, admits to the Florida tryst, which caused them a breakup in the first place and wants him to overlook it as a bad mistake, never to happen again.
Next, he hears her conversation with big dick and he still keeps her...JPB - you have got to be kidding? You either cuck these guys or you man them up and BTB so...what the hell???
Thanks anyway, we know you don't care!!!
Loved it
Taking it for what it is worth, I loved it. A quick read. Very fitting ending given what she loved most. Five stars. Would a real man have taken her back? Hell no! I wouldn't have even married her. Serious warning signs.
I'd Go One Better
I'd arrange an "accident" that would make her unable to dance AT ALL!
Cut Her Loose
As a part time slut girlfriend she is fine. As a wife and future mother, she is shit. You have to understand what life is about - survival and procreation. You have to know that marriage is about enhancing your chances for survival, procreation and the survival of your offspring. You also have to know that cheaters make terrible spouses as their betrayals threaten your chances for survival, the transmission of your genes to the next generation and the survival of any offspring. This is simple undeniable fact. So, divorce her, fuck her as a slut if you want to, but do not maintain a marriage with IT!
the problem is right in the story, but our hero misses it...
"I'll make you forget baby, I'll make you forget and I'll keep making you forget for the rest of your life."
That's fine - BUT he should realize at that point that HE cannot do the same for HER - he can never make her forget. And she never will; she will be vulnerable until her tits shrivel up and her cunt dries out.
Not bad but i would have divorced her
he knows she is a cheating slut and maybe diseased why keep her
LET'S SEE 5 YRS THE 1ST TIME
2 yrs and counting this time, TK U MLJ LV NV
Hard to believe!
This woman is nothing but a scheming cheater. She will do it again. She actually admitted to the other cheat that they might have to wait several months but she will do it again. Jettison her as soon as possible and move on.
What he did to the boyfriend was good and his visit to the hospital was superb, but I don't understand how he could even think of taking her back. No-No-No!
Thanks you for the story.
doesn't work for me
She is a classic big cock slut, she rubs up against one and her pussy does her thinking for her after that. (just like a guy letting his "little head" do the thinking)
Sooner or later she will find another, maybe in an elevator or who knows where but she will be "hypnotized" by a big one and gone for days.
Better to get over it sooner than later and on to finding someone new.
Who wants to live like that?
Always suspicious? Always wondering what she is doing when she is out of your sight? If she is late, do you wonder if someone has been slipping it to her? Don't see how anyone would want to live like that. Time for a divorce. Should have never let her back in the house. Good story until he took her back. Then it went to hell in a hand basket.
I CALL BULLSHIT
SHES A CUNT AND CAN NEVER BE TRUSTED, SHOULD HAVE KICKED HER S.UT ASS OUT
Why not divorce her?
If you're going to question where she is for the rest of your life why not just get a divorce. And that's what he's doing by checking the phone bills, keeping the tap on the phone and the bug in the car. He doesn't trust her and justifiably so. She already showed her true colors - twice. Once when she went to Florida and now when she took off with a man with a big cock. And she would have done it again had he not thrashed the boyfriend. And she will do it again when she finds another big cock. Nope! He can never trust her again and regardless of how much he loves her, it's time to divorce the slut and find someone honest.
DANCE WITH ME HENRY
and learn to say yes to all requests, who knows what might happen with all that extra rope. TK U MLJ LV NV
Here is a contrary question
Why doesn't she divorce him?
Being under constant scrutiny and surveillance cannot be a comfortable way for her to live. This is not to say she doesn't deserve it. And yes, she broke it.
I am just unsure what this guy brings to the table that makes her want to stay. It had better be something pretty amazing and we know it isn't a 10 inch cock.
I can't see this lasting much more time than this.
One 'theme' in a JPB story which goes against expectations
This is not your DQS, your MM, or your Stangstar story. Love is not this incredible immovable force (until JPB wants it to be) You will rarely see a 'Breadwinner' or a crazy girl like "Curiosity".
These are reasonably ordinary people. They may love each other enough to get over some garbage each throws into the mix, BUT...you do not see someone engage in endless humiliation. She went beyond the pale and he acted accordingly. He wasn't a Matt Moreau clown who JUST CAN'T GET OVER HER.
I am fully sure that he can find another good woman. She can find another good man.
But they don't. And in some way, that is a rather sweet thing to see. These two have options. They do. They are both attractive and acceptable people for a partner (save for her occasional cock stupidity). They COULD just cut the cord and get on with life.
That they stay together speaks more of love than an operatic Stangstarian hero gunning his Mustang towards Fortune and another Hottie.
The problem those who ask WHY he doesn't leave are not seeing the life left out: all the good things she brought to the mix. We don't see how she brought him from the brink of alcoholism, or helped him build a business, or held his dying mother's hand for 6 months. I have to assume she brings something like that because he is staying.
I have to assume he is not a total idiot to feel this way.
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