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Venus Butterfly

byJustRong©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/01/10

holy shit

this is one if the better stories I have read lately. great storyy line this gave me such a hard boner so thanks. and keep writing can't wait for the next story.

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by fregen06/01/10

Very Intense

You're improving. This is much better than "Headache."

Thanks for sharing.

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by sirsemega06/01/10

So Wrong...

but sooo right!
Well done. Hot hot hot story!

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by digdaddyrich06/01/10

A great storyline and well told story

Now all he has to figure out is how is he going to satisfy his sister in law without getting caught.

It could be a good chapter if he brings his wife in for a threesome.

Thanks for the good story

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by Anonymous06/02/10

Hot but...

The story was definitely hot. But you must be a contortionist because from your description of the positions of you and Lori on the love seat, your hands could not climaxed her unless you criss-crossed your arms between and under her legs.

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by Anonymous06/02/10

Hot story

Nothing more need be said.

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by Anonymous08/18/11

JustRight!

Awesome short story.

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by imhapless02/01/12

Really sexy

Very readable and great sex and anticipation. 5 for sure

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