All Comments on 'Unforgettable Night'

Great first story.

and well-written first story. You need to write more. Thank you

Very nice story where her roommate slowly seduces her friend where she is comfortable in reciprocating.

Nice story - especially for a first time. The pacing is always the key for me and I think you did a great job, kept it moving along, kept me moving right along with it. Looking forward to number 2.

Great story. Not what I normally read but it was very hot and very well written. I liked how you mimicked what she had done to you when it was your turn to pleasure Sam. Keep writing!

You've written a great first time story. I'd like to read more about your relationship. Keep writing.

that was the hottest story ever (;

That was beautiful

Fantastic! the only complaint I have is it isn't long enough! :D

That first time of reciprocating lesbian love is truly unforgettable. You know then that that's who you are meant to be.

This story is superb! It was dynamic, forceful and powerful. I wasn't just riveted to this story, in addition, I was welded to it and it delivered to my expectations in a huge measure. The only disappointment was that I was looking for more of this story. I was looking for it to continue on a following page. It was well worth the read and begs to be completed or begs for a follow up story. Don't ignore your readers and reward them with more to this story. My primary problem with this and many other stories is that the author stops too soon and doesnt carry it to its natural conclusion.

A very enjoyable read. Very nicely paced if a bit short but a very sensitive read and a VERY sensual one as well.

Thoroughly enjoyable. Looking forward to more.

Bil

Very enjoyable.

Wonderful story. Even though I am male I can appreciate the deep love two people, two women can have. Thank you for sharing your precious joy you must have felt

Excellent work

Brilliant. Thanks for that.