All Comments on 'Cocktail Party'

You did an excellent job setting the scene, with good dialog and even a bit of character development. I hope you continue to write - I'd like to see a longer story from you.

Your story was chosen for highlighting in the Story Feedback section under the ANDTHEEND thread, post #120.

I gave you a 5 vote for your effort. Good job.

Vivid scene setting and character building. It seemed to be real to me when I read the story.

Thanks for the good read.

...rare story about a husband and wife supporting each other.Fuck you mom!

This is a lovely story. I look forward to reading more stories by you in the future!

-- Jim

The characters were the star in this story and I think that was a great achievement. They felt real and the dialouge was great and moved the story forward nicely. Really good job with the descriptions and the passive-aggressive jab at the MIL was brilliant!

I loved the read! Rare to find here on this site is a married couple loving each other, instead of laying waste to their marriage and their lives!

Fuck that bitch mother in-law, she should have dipped those crab puffs in the drippings of their lovemaking and fed them to her!

Thanks for writing!