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Wonderful!
That was lovely!
Elle x
so sweet
that was such a good and sweet story. im only sad it was so short. great job KV
Great story. hoping it's not done yet. i'd love to read more of this
Confused!
Ok so he says he is sorry after his nasty comment in her shop and then doesn't even talk to her in two years which I find strange since they were so close during childhood, then you jump to the bar scene where she is the one who propositions him, next thing you know they are in bed get hot and sweaty! Then he says "I've waited so long for that Gabby, you have no idea."
Neither do the readers since you haven't let us know what he was thinking or anything from his point of view. This story was enjoyable to read but also very confusing and there were to many questions left unanswered. So I think we need more chapters.
short and sultry
i thought this was well written and heart felt.
Damn
Amazing talent, do us all a favor do not stop writing.
Excellent writing & story line!
Chapter 2 and beyond please!
BRAVO!!
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