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by Anonymous

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by LadyGenevieve05/10/11

Absolutely

Lovely.

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by tazz31705/08/12

24 hour blues

FOR ILL LOVED ONES. tk u mlj lv nv

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by AylahAyres08/31/12

not what I expected

Beautifully heartbreaking.

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by Apple_of_Eden03/31/16

Tearfully sad.

Oh NS, that was so tearfully sad. Having lived with an excessive amount of illness and death over the past few years, I felt the deep physical and emotional pain once again as I read your poem. Now, tears are flowing.

It's funny how they say time heals all wounds. I'm not sure I believe that.

Thank you for sharing your words, if not their meaning with us.
Apple

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by tazz31703/31/16

MOMMYS WITH SICKNESSES

affect the whole family dynamic, TK U MLJ LV NV

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