but you made a fun story out of it too. Good stuff. Thanks...Mancelt.
Nice story - enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.....
The thought of being right around the corner from 'rush hour traffic' is so hot. Great story.. excellent detail. Waiting for the next chapter, Jake
Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there's more..
Great story! Keepup the good writing!!
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That's a pretty hot one
but you made a fun story out of it too. Good stuff. Thanks...Mancelt.
Enjoyed
Nice story - enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.....
Fantastic!
The thought of being right around the corner from 'rush hour traffic' is so hot. Great story.. excellent detail.
Waiting for the next chapter,
Jake
Great story
Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there's more..
I saw you walking!
Great story! Keepup the good writing!!
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