The Young Widow Ch. 07

More Please

Great story one of the best i've ever read, is it going to go any further? I hope so

Great Chapter

The chapter is excellent along with your other chapters. This fine work is very hot and enjoyable. Please continue the story. Thank you!

Great story!

I have just finished reading all 7 chapters. What a fantastic story and it just keeps getting better! Can't wait to read what happens next!

So Hot

I have just finished reading the seven chapters and am so turned and dripping wet that I shall have to seek relief.. Very well written. Please may we have some more!

great story parts 1 to 7. more of anne and jen please

good story

it was great story parts 1 to 7. more of anne and jen please

great

tremendous story please continue with anne jen and lori

I have to say I'm more than a bit disapointed

I tripped over this series and noticed that you haven't added to it in the last 3 years. So, yes, I knew going in that I could be left hanging, but was hopeful when I noticed a follow up story about the sister that I would get some kind of closure. Unfortunately that's not the case. Furthermore, I also realize that you (like many others) have a life and that you write for your enjoyment and not necessarily for us fans (who sometimes forget that we are getting wonderful stories at ZERO charge). Taking all that into consideration, it's still cruel to not finish. You truely have a skill at story telling and this series (sex aside, I'm sorry, but while I enjoy the erotica of it all, I just love good stories) has been well written. While I doubt that my words would inspire you to finish this (lol..or even if you read it), but I do hope you do so.

Anyways, thanks for sharing this tale with us and I hope that one day you may finish it. All the best.

The last chapter blew it for me.

You had a perfect opportunity to make this into a good coming of age story but decided to keep as a pure stroke story. What a waste.

You should have had Jen falling for her 1st love - Anne.
Anne has Jen agree to not have sex.
Jen finds out that Anne and Lori had sex. She feels rejected, pushed aside by Anne.
Anne needs to reconcile her feelings for Jen. Why did she invite Jen on the vacation and then snub her?

Instead you have a young girl who has never had a boyfriend or any other lover who clearly loves this woman and her kids, all of a sudden in a 3-some like an experienced dyke.

Good series

I really enjoyed this series. While it could have used a judicious editor at times, it flowed well and was quite erotic. Thank you for sharing this with us!