All Comments on 'Transformation to Julie Ch. 02'

it got a little too much at the end there. The pucking and the heel in the penis hole. Being tied up and fucked and forced is cool but tone it down on the torture and pain cuz that ain't hot or sexy. Love the idea of turning him into a girl and the sex club though and the special room. Good read until chapter 2 got too painful.

ya got ever mans wish come true, so fucking sexy

keep writing. anxiously awaiting next chapter

I liked the story. It does combine a bunch of sexual themes like lesbian, anal, toys, and S&M with a TS. Do you plan on adding to the story? This was done some time ago. You also need to have someone edit the story before you submit it. I found that you keep making the same error in the story. To have someone not make a noise or say a word; the correct word is QUIET NOT QUITE which was repeated several times in error.

Use an editor / proofreader... 3-stars