Absolute Magic Ch. 02

Good story but wished there was more.

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Awesome. More please.

More please soon!

An excellent start. A nice set of characters so far and the cauldron is coming up to simmer nicely.

great story

great story, but the chapters need to be longer :)

Good chapter

I wonder when Raven will come to her senses? She is now overloaded with a hot guy but what she will do when she realized she is just a new sex toy? She seems strong and indipendent witch that will chose to be free rather than stay as a lover to the Prince:) And I really liked her in her previous black make up and clothes:)

lovely

i really enjoy the feel of this story. The way her emotions are being used, the feelings of them going every direction at once. So much to digest at once. I also like your writting style, and i look forward to more.

thank you,
Bainsidhe

where is it going

dimitri is about to get his world rocked i bet, and momma is going to be pissed. which is great, hope he gives raven some confidence and she gives him a bit of humility and they will be great, hope to see more soon

want more

this is a very interesting story and i like where it is going look forward to more. thank you for sharing Mechmanas

Enjoyed

I enjoyed the story. I look forward to the next installment.

loved it

I want more! Please try to make the chapters longer. It seems when the story really starts getting very very interesting... it ends... so please make it longer! But i am really enjoying reading this story. I love it so much!! I cant wait for the next chapter.

Waiting for the next part

Hi, when will the next part be out??? Dying to read it. Please update soon.....

Loved It!

Need more ASAP!!! this was great!!!!!!!!

Don't Stop

Good job, love this story line. Don't normally read this genre, but I keep looking for your stories. Thanks!!!

Keep it coming, love it so far.

10 thumbs WAY AY WAY up

what a wounderful storie

NEED MORE!

Great story, Upload ASAP.

can't wait for more! Raven seems so cute in this story but I do hope she starts to slowly find her strength.

nice:)

Love it! Keep it coming:)

More Please

Love the story. But what happens? Does Catalina get her way? Or Dmitir and Raven explore thier attraction?

Can't wait!!

Dmitri & Raven will make a great couple. What happens next, do they get together or does his mother prevents it. What happens raven now? Need to know ASAP!! POST NEW CHAPTERS SOON.

Please Continue!

this is a really great story so far, and completely original! please continue with this story.

I keep checking back for a new chapter!! .....hint hint...

Please Continue

Please keep writing as this is one of the best stories I've read so far and I would hate for it to be abandoned.

next chapter please!

I love ur story so far, so keep writing!!!

Hmmmm

I think you have some writer's blocks for not posting your great story, since there are so many compliments and requests but you still not responding. I do hope you get your muse back since there is nothing compare to unfinish good story.

Please Continue!!!

Great start I am hooked!!

Your style of writing

is amazing. You put the normal vampire story into a new perspective

Loved it! More please!

Chapter 3 please

wondering when chapter 3 will be added im enjoying this story so far

Ending???

Lets hope there will be another chapter,seems like so many go unfinished on here.It was good,what there was of it.

still waiting for

chapter 3 please

MORE!!!

Please and Thank You (^_^)

will wait.

I like the story thus far, and will be awaiting for the next chapter, but just throwing this out there, are you planning to make several chapters?

Awww again!?

Everytime I get my teeth into a good story...*insert dramatic sigh here* I hate waiting so please hurry with their story, I can't wait to read more since I am a witch as well!! Wish I could find a hunky vamp prince like this hehehe. Next chapter soon please and make it a longer one!! K fankies =^_^=

it is good

this is a good storie most stories just have sex but you added a storie back ground. keep going it is good.

Hopefully...

There is more to come. This was a great start, I read right thru the first two chapters and am hopeful that more is on the way. The story really grabbed my interest. Great job!

I keep coming back to see if there has been an addition to this story but my hopes are alwas in vain. Please please please continue it soon.

xx

Quite honestly

I like both chapters so far. I appreciate the fact that you did not let them jump into bed immediately since the plot builds the sensuality. i did wonder about Lilith but quite honestly his mom is the one that has me completely intrigued and Iara sounds like a hoot. Keep writing, the story is pretty awesome!

~F.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!

You must continue the story, i am hooked! i love the story behind it, not just sex. Please hurry and add more to this wonderful story! :)

MORE PLEASE!!!

It would be awesome if you could keep going with this story... please?

Please continue.

The possibilities with this story are endlessly intriguing.

come on .!

I absolutly LOVE this story so far, I've been checking back to see if there's another chapter, but to no avail. Please continue this .!

Please continue!

You have the beginnings of a fantastic story. I hope you'll keep it up.

love but hurry with cht 3

I love this but hurry please!!!!

Bring us more

The basis of this story has come to fruition, and has given itself a solid sensual base on which to thrive and flourish itself. So now please continue your exquisite story in ravishing detail; we are all waiting for your next installment in this talented tale of Dark and delicious delight.

Loving it!

more more more!!...Please? Loving the story. Keep up the good work!!

You have the touch!!

From the first para you had me hooked. Loved both chapters. Please give us more.

next !!!

Iam jealous, what next

Any More ??

Please its such an intriguing Story....

Loved It!

Next chapter plz..