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Wow. The conversation in the backalley was awesome. Realy erotic. That doesn't mean I did not like the rest.
To Anonymous
Thanks. I just read this entire story and really had no idea how many grammatical errors there were. I'm so embarrassed because there's an English major in my family, so I should know better! I didn't think I needed someone else to proof read for me. My mistake. ;)
Now that I've looked back at this story, there's so much I would have changed. I don't like this story very much anymore, not as much as I did when I was writing it.
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