What a lucky gut that your sweet sister lets you fuck her ass , be good to her .
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Anonymous06/13/10
Very Erotic
I really enjoyed your story, especially the anal portion of it. I hope you will continue this tale with them having an informal wedding and kids.
You have good pacing which is not easy. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous06/23/12
Seldom...
...are stories both hot and well-written. This is both. I'd like to see what happens to them though. And maybe more details of their fucking and sucking.
The humor you added was great, and the hesitation in starting the relationship was good. No real sibling relationship starts easy. I would like to see you put some reality into them handling a sibling relationship. Show how hard it is, but a sibling relationship doesn't end easy either. Show the perseverance to make it succeed. This would make it real.
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Anonymous08/31/13
Romantic
Loved the way it started out. The closeness of the relationship, and the build up to anal love. Give us more.
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Anonymous10/15/13
nothing but a tease
he should have told her to start looking for a new place to live when she started the teasing. she could have moved in with the parents, i hate unrealistic tease stories.
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Anonymous07/04/14
To nothing BUT
You donot have a sister do you?
I grew up with three sisters,,,,, It was the most wonderful time of my life, It could also could be pure HELL at times,,, BUT I AM NOT COMPLAINING.
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Anonymous03/25/15
vasectomy
you said that he had a vasectomy however later when she was sucking him off you said that he came in her mouth and she swallowed it, well this doesn't make much sense at all.
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Anonymous07/02/15
Hey I want to get my sister to fuck me but I don't know how what can I say or do to get her to do it my email is tannerschmitt2001@yahoo.com and my phone is 717- 430- 0976 text me
Luck Stiff
What a lucky gut that your sweet sister lets you fuck her ass , be good to her .
Very Erotic
I really enjoyed your story, especially the anal portion of it. I hope you will continue this tale with them having an informal wedding and kids.
You have good pacing which is not easy. Keep up the good work.
Seldom...
...are stories both hot and well-written. This is both. I'd like to see what happens to them though. And maybe more details of their fucking and sucking.
Jane in Los Altos
excellent story
The humor you added was great, and the hesitation in starting the relationship was good. No real sibling relationship starts easy. I would like to see you put some reality into them handling a sibling relationship. Show how hard it is, but a sibling relationship doesn't end easy either. Show the perseverance to make it succeed. This would make it real.
Romantic
Loved the way it started out. The closeness of the relationship, and the build up to anal love. Give us more.
nothing but a tease
he should have told her to start looking for a new place to live when she started the teasing. she could have moved in with the parents, i hate unrealistic tease stories.
To nothing BUT
You donot have a sister do you?
I grew up with three sisters,,,,, It was the most wonderful time of my life, It could also could be pure HELL at times,,, BUT I AM NOT COMPLAINING.
vasectomy
you said that he had a vasectomy however later when she was sucking him off you said that he came in her mouth and she swallowed it, well this doesn't make much sense at all.
Hey I want to get my sister to fuck me but I don't know how what can I say or do to get her to do it my email is tannerschmitt2001@yahoo.com and my phone is 717- 430- 0976 text me
hope it not it
you need to have chapter 2
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