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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/11/10

Luck Stiff

What a lucky gut that your sweet sister lets you fuck her ass , be good to her .

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by Anonymous06/13/10

Very Erotic

I really enjoyed your story, especially the anal portion of it. I hope you will continue this tale with them having an informal wedding and kids.

You have good pacing which is not easy. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous06/23/12

Seldom...

...are stories both hot and well-written. This is both. I'd like to see what happens to them though. And maybe more details of their fucking and sucking.

Jane in Los Altos

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by jlc12304/13/13

excellent story

The humor you added was great, and the hesitation in starting the relationship was good. No real sibling relationship starts easy. I would like to see you put some reality into them handling a sibling relationship. Show how hard it is, but a sibling relationship doesn't end easy either. Show the perseverance to make it succeed. This would make it real.

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by Anonymous08/31/13

Romantic

Loved the way it started out. The closeness of the relationship, and the build up to anal love. Give us more.

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by Anonymous10/15/13

nothing but a tease

he should have told her to start looking for a new place to live when she started the teasing. she could have moved in with the parents, i hate unrealistic tease stories.

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by Anonymous07/04/14

To nothing BUT

You donot have a sister do you?
I grew up with three sisters,,,,, It was the most wonderful time of my life, It could also could be pure HELL at times,,, BUT I AM NOT COMPLAINING.

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by Anonymous03/25/15

vasectomy

you said that he had a vasectomy however later when she was sucking him off you said that he came in her mouth and she swallowed it, well this doesn't make much sense at all.

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by Anonymous07/02/15

Hey I want to get my sister to fuck me but I don't know how what can I say or do to get her to do it my email is tannerschmitt2001@yahoo.com and my phone is 717- 430- 0976 text me

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by jfletc300004/18/16

hope it not it

you need to have chapter 2

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