All Comments on 'Mercy'

I hope you continue the story. I would love to see how you develop the characters. :)

it was really good.

This was an excellent beginning to what could potentially be a well written romantic saga. Please continue, as it would be a shame to lose two such feisty and appealingly complex characters.

It is few and far between that readers on this site find a story that is well developed and well written. It would be a shame not to see their relationship develop further.

But how does he propose to learn all that she has to teach? Will he remain with her or take her home with him? This could be just the beginning of this story. Keep writing, please.

Thanks for the kind encouragement, all of you! I'm afraid this is very much just a short story, but I'm working on two longer ones at the moment. I hope you find other characters I write just as appealing.

I can definitely be talked into more stories of ancient Ireland, and the inevitable Vikings who wintered there and often settled. Just drop me a word if you'd like more, I'm learning Irish Gaelige and can use more fiction as an excuse to practice!

good start to what could become a good story so please continue

rosamundi died on 11/26/11 of complications from a longtime illness.

Thank you everyone who read and appreciated her work. Your feedback gave her a lot of joy in the last years of her life.

You'll be missed