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So Far Away Ch. 02

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by Morrigan_06/13/10

Very good second chapter:)

It is so interesting the point of perspective you have chosen:) So is Danoar really human? And what happened to him? What about his people - if he is not human but from another planet? Will they search for him?

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by lildragon06/13/10

More Please

Really good story. Looking forward to more.

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by bitofkink06/13/10

Really Very Good

Very interesting. And I have all kinds of questions. Why did they take Jensen to begin with? What is the objective of all these tests? Was Danoar really human? What did they do to him? Are these gray aliens' experiments sanctioned by anyone? Are they being done illegally? Will there be anyone on the aliens' technological level that will oppose them?

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by BrenCain06/13/10

Questions will be answered

Wow, I really wasn't expecting so many responses this fast after posting! :-D
I see that my plan has worked! My idea of building suspense and questions is working better than anticipated.
More chapters are to come, I don't want to spoil anything, just keep reading. I have been working hard to keep the chapters coming and the plot thickening. I hope you enjoy the rest of what I have in store. Thanks everyone for reading and the comments, I am very honored that you do so.

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