All Comments on 'Deceptions Ch. 01'

Thank your reader for me too. I love this story. Must be my own theatrical background. :)

Today I am a little more grateful then yesterday. Thank you intrepid Julie you for encouraging one of my favorite authors. That favorite is of course you stevieraygovan and you did a marvelous job on the dialogue along with everything else in this story. So looking forward to your next installment.

Thank you for the comment, but who are your referencing there? The only Julie connected to any of my stories is Angelina's blonde sister in "Sisters."

Anna, you need to get back into theater, so you can find yourself a role just like Jen's. :evil grin:

If I do, will you find your way to my happy place to see me? :p

I can only guess at the true reasons for the title but it makes me dream about the final chapters. I loved the story, just the right amount of teasing and sex. The people are described accurately and I can vision them in my mind. For my own personal taste I would love to see some lesbianism and helpless bondage added in. I am very bi and submissive, but I love to read all kinds of erotica. Thank you for your story and my masturbatory dreaming. huggss, judy

No bondage, though, light or otherwise. You will likely never see any bondage in one of my stories. Probably not even blindfolds. I'm way too into the visual aspect, and I especially want to see the expressions in a woman's eyes as she moves through the entire dance. More than anything, I don't want the woman bound and submissive. The women in my stories are never weak, helpless and under someone else's control; even with the submissive really having all the power. It's just not my thing. I want the woman to be strong and confident, and she's always going to be a fully willing participant. Often as not, it'll be her show; she'll be in charge.

What's with that nic, btw? Bwaaa.

Anna's happy place? Which one? Regardless, they all need to be made to purr.

Great story. I love the imagery you are giving. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you sooooo much for such a great opening! I don't think I've read any of your other stories yet, but I certainly will now.

So well written, and the characters are perfect. The plot is great too... This is definitely a keeper! I don't get into series stories generally, but yours isn't a series story! They truly are chapters...

Thanks for that!

Really terrific series. In particular, the dialogue was superb and drove the show.

Great story with great writing, it came alive when we read it...

New to the site, nice story.

Layla is a Persian love story. Harrison's wife's name was Patty not Layla. However, it is true that Clapton was thinking of Patty when he wrote the song.

Patricia (Pattie) Boyd.

Somehow, though, naming the song or this play "Pattie" wouldn't have had quite the same dramatic effect.

boring.

It's almost unbelievable - a great story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Please continue with this sexy slut of a girlfriend