by MatureLadyLover
You need to learn the proper meaning and use of at least one word. Go find the meaning of the word "mum" which is remain quiet/silent for almost the entire world population. While "mom/mother/mama" all refer to a female parent.
Not only in the British Isles, but in Ireland, too. I thought it was a cute story and was made even funnier by the ignorant comment.
It's most likely the same idiot 'Anon' that posts the same thing at boringly regular intervals. By 'the world' he means his world of North America. He professes to know nothing of English usage in the UK, Ireland, India, Australia, or anywhere else. Perhaps the rest of us should post loads of comments every time a US author uses 'pants', 'suspenders', 'gas', etc. etc. in a context that we could pretend to find confusing. But I suppose we shouldn't expect too much from a people that hung Toyota out to dry just because US drivers don't know how to use an ignition key.
the ignorant xenophobia of so many US folk. If that word isn't in Webster's, it's certainly in the Oxford.
who didn't know that mum meant "mom" or "mother":
you really didnt know?
you really should start reading books that have more words than pictures.
sheesh.
Please take care of "Apostrophe - ' " it should be mum's, maggie's, mums becomes plural mum's - singular. Also, if you mention about both the parents together - for eg - My parents house - It should be written as -- My parents' house. Got that? Ok when it comes to singular It should be mum's, maggie's, Lucy's, MatureLadyLover's story. And when it comes to plural - parents' house, brothers' girlfriends. I'm pointing it out beacause in the entire story you didn't used the "Apostrophe" correctly. Next time be careful.
Other than that - this story was like every young guy's dream...I liked it.
Plot similar to The Graduate... Mrs Robinson and Elaine...without the jealousy,and consequences..
What a great story line, well thought out and just loved the ending
Such a great story theme and well told but it ends so soon when there is so much pleasure to be had by all. You are a fine writer....... let us readers enjoy a longer story!
Smiles. I had not thought to read any of the mature stories. Then I read yours.
I read it as a story, an it is wonderful. As are others you have done.
An cause of you I now enjoy, this new array of readings.
Thanks. .
I came twice in my pants as I read this story. As I read, I was thinking of my own 'Mum's' two best friends. I realize now that at one point they must have thrown me some bait but I was too naive to bite. Shame on me! I could've fucked them both at the opportunity. I know what I'm gonna do. I'm gonna go back to my 'Mum's' and throw them a bait of my own. Should they bite, I'm gonna 'cum' back here and tell my story.
'Mum' is the word, Anon-shithead!
Get a life all those worried or showing off about English grammar.
Its the story we're interested in.
Great story. I loved it and gave it 5 stars. Imagine fucking the mother and the daughter in the same afternoon. Really enjoyed the story!!!
This was quite funny and entertaining. I just have one word to say and that is "Menopause". Oh yeah, I would also ask why would she want to talk to her husband and his mum while having his cum dripping down her leg? Was this her way of getting revenge for a hubby and best friend tryst? Is there a part 2?
19 yo daughter and 58 yo mom does not jive. Make it her grandmother and the problem is solved. Instead of an unusually old mom, you have an unusually young granny. Still the same fun, maybe even hotter.
Great story very hot. hope you continue with a couple more parts. second part should have both mom n daughter playing with him together n being pregnant together by him and third part should be his mom finding out n joining in om the fun.
Mother and daughter at the same party, definitely a good afternoon! Another well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories ?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.