All Comments on 'Blood Bonds Pt. 12'

Loved the first 11 chapters, fell in love with the characters - then nothing - figured life had intervened.

Truly thrilled that you've taken up the story again.

I'm very glad to see another chapter appear. You have a way of making your characters seem real. Very good reading. Thank you and please give us more soon.

Very, very happy to see another chapter. Once again, a sumptuous read. Well done.

one of my favourite stories and I just finished re-reading the first 11 chapters last month. This update is all the more welcome as it was unexpected. I hope there is still a long way to go in the story. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

Oh dear god give us more!

This is by far one of my favorites if not my favorite. Now please don't make us wait years for more. Even months. I have read this story 3 times so far in a bit over 3 years. Twice this year in fact. So please keep this amazing story and cast coming. Thank you much.

I'm so glad you're back! The kind of cliffhangers you leave us with are surely cruel and unusual punishment. I LOVE this story and have been begging for more chapters for YEARS! Please tell me that I'm not going to have to wait long for the next chapter?!?!?! Thanks for updating this story. I have no idea how you keep it all fresh in your mind with the long gaps between chapters but keep doing what you're doing. (Maybe a bit faster??) The story is amazing.

Very very good as usual.. I thought the story was done, but there's a whole new layer.

Really eager to find out more about Talera, Sarah and everyone else!

i mean, come on! just 2 pages? and knowing you, it might just be a couple more months before the next chapter. well, anyway im glad youre back and cant wait for more.

After all that and you only leave us hanging like fish on a hook set out too long. Please don't wait so long to send out the next part.

but sadly its only two pages but it was still very good..don't make us wait too long for the next chapter please:)

Jeez, way to leave your readers hanging! I just found your stories on here, and I was instantly hooked. More, please!

Awesomely done. So glad to see you writing again, and I can't wait for more!

Please continue. I have enjoyed reading so far, so please don't leave us hanging too long.

found this story yesterday, i have been up all night and now all day reading this only to be left hanging!!! i cant wait to see what happens next, the plot is unpredictable and complex, i love it!!

just hope it doesn't take too long to see the next chapter on here!!!

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Would love to know if there is more to come - email kim@streten.net

Found this story yesterday and I am hopelessly in love. Please post the next chapter soon. I'll b waiting on pins and needles :)

I just finished reading parts 1-12 and sure hope you are working on more!

Wow! that's all I can think of to say. Sucks you in practically from the first sentance. I can hardly wait to read the rest.

Wow... okay... so when's the next chapter coming?

OMG please please come out with the next chapter soon! You cannot leave us faithful readers hanging at this point. That said I love your writing and truly loved how this story has gone from just a simple were/demon to a truly beautiful story of friends, pain, love, devotion and betrayal. Keep up the great work!

Just finished reading part 1-12 and was spellbound for every minute of it. Great story. Very much hoping for another chapter.

Absolutely fantastic story, but, what the hell? It's been like years since the last update?? Don't leave us hanging! Finish the story please!!!

authors always end the series in the middle of it just like manyeyedhydras succubus summoning series try the series though in the meantime its under erotic horror but its good

Just read ch. 1-12 and really want to know what happens next. Please Please a new chapter soon.

Don't tell me u r gonna now write 1 chapter every year??...cuz it looks just like tht....u took 2 years????? to write 10 chapters and then next 2 years to write the last 2 chapters????.......I absolutely love ur series have been waiting 4 the next chapter 4 so long now...but i think its gonna be in da middle of the next year by the looks of it.

PLEASE dont leave it there wat happeneds next loved it so far, soo please write some more very soon

I've been busy rereading this story and i havwe 2 thingss to say....1) this is in my opinion an excellent and 2) please put some new chapters up soon , this cliff hanger is unbearable.

I've reread it at least 10 times and you left it in such a crucial moment! I must, must, must know what happens next!!! Please!

I just read this story through, and you can't stop on me now! I need more!

Any plans towards completing this series or is this as far as it gets?

please finish this, it's been so good so far!!!

Your story is getting better and better. Well done.

This was a brilliant read. Are you done? I would love to read more. But it seems you haven't written in a while. Shame really, there are precious few writers on this site that can mach this level of talent.

I wish you all the best author, but I do hope to see more from you soon!

Your last three postings were posted on 9/11/2008, 7/23/2009 and 6/13/2010, so your next chapter is due in about a month or two. :) In any case, I remain hopeful for more chapters in this wonderful story. You are a talented writer and I Thank You for sharing your gift.

Please more i love this story

Are you going to finish this story! It been almost a year....I'm dieing to know what happens

On of the best stories I have read on Literotica. Can't wait for the next part. I really hope it's a case of writers block or temporary hiatus caused by the dreaded real life and not a permament cliffhanger *shudder*.

Again and again I come back to this. Talera and Co. are as much a part of my daily routine as breathing, at some time each day I remember a small snipet, then after a while I have to come and read it again.

Will there ever be more????????????

just read the whole thing...awesome

you cant leave it there! I'm hoping you are still writing? I just read all your chapters in one sitting. I am hooked :) more please!

i have lost track of how many times i have read this story now i love it. personally i think its the best story on here. cant get enough. hope you are able to post the next chapter up soon

:'C left hangin,,,, really hope there will b more

Please finish the story! I love it!

You started this story 6 years ago in 2006 and your last submission was in 2010 i wish i checked before i started reading cause i wouldnt have bothered.. I do hope one day your get back to finishing it cause its a great read but i wont hold my breath lol .... good luck anyway.

What a great story! I've just spent the last few days falling in love with the characters and really hope for more. Will you finish this series? I really hope so. You are a fantastic writer!

Really hope you finish this. Was a great read.

Very interesting & different from anything else I've read.

I am dying to know more please come back to this one :(

There's like one or two chapters left to finish the story and it's "dead" for 2 years now...

P.S. BTW, the story became considerably easier and more enjoyable to read halfway through. Probably because the events actually started to unfold...

i just re-read the story thinking that by some miraculous fate, the author had returned 2 us n had finished off the story. sigh...thats so not the case. we're still left suspended n looks like the author is gone 4 good. hope everything gets better with pphair.

This story is realy good when will it be finshed

Its just plain cruel to write a story this good and leave it unfinished. If yore dead or in a coma ,then I apologize, otherwise get your ass in gear and write an ending

You need to come back ! I love this story and it's heartbreaking that you haven't put an update .

This story is amazing! I absolutely love it, you are an amazing writer and have really captured my interest in this story. I've been keeping an eye on this since the last chapter was published and I wanted to let you know that the interest in this fantastic story and great characters has not diminished in the slightest. I really hope you find it in you to finish this story. I'm absolutely dying to know what happens next!

Beautifully written and I am hooked please keep writing this story. I can't wait for the next chapters.

I still check every month or so in the vain hope that this great story has restarted

Please finish this arc of the story!? I'd really love to see how the capture scene plays out. Can we find out what Sarah's decision is? To be or not to be immortal. Does the betrayal of her parents play into her decision?

Please come back and finish this part!!!

7 years unfinished. It will never be finished.

The writer is foolish. He constantly says he has no time and has changed the storyline. He even says that it wasn't meant to be this long at about the four chapter mark. The story was at a natural end point and could have been finished off. But no, had to carry on and there by ruin 11.9 chapters.

His fault he's a fool doing that.

THE STORY WILL NEVER BE FINISHED....... EVER....

anonymous comments should be banned

What the fuck mate u need to write more

This chapter is literally mind-blowing

now that you have my ATTENTION. please keep this going. Ive read all 12 chapters I have needs , like wanting to see this through till the end. like your writings very much..

Thats the difficulty with these serial stories, all too often the author disappears and the story is abandoned. The outline associated with this story indicates that the series is still open and that the author had apparently intended to continue. Unfortunately, there has been no activity in almost 13 1/2 years as of this date.

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There are any number of serial stories, like this one, on Literotica. After what may be years of labor, the storyline abruptly terminates without explanation and nothing further is heard from the author. What circumstances called the author away in this particular case is unlikely to ever be known. It is clear, however, that after more than 13 years, it is extremely unlikely that the author will continue to develop the story, much less complete the storyline.

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Unfortunate indeed.