All Comments on 'Juujin Primer'

... what the point of this is, since it *isn't* a story. Do you intend to write or post one?

This looks like an interesting premise for a story. I'm looking forward to the next part.

I think it's going to be a deconstruction of the "magical girlfriend" genre! I can't wait to see this.

Not that I wish to sound overly negative, but this might also just be a strange attempt to promote some new RPG. As a basis for a story, it has a lot of potential.

I didn't realize the primer had gotten approved. I put it up along with the first two chapters of the story I'm writing for the world, but the story got rejected by the site administrators because I included a link back to the yahoo group I set up to also host the work. I just figured they'd rejected the whole mess, didn't realize the primer got approved.