Fight to the Death Ch. 01

hate it

When I first started reading your stories I loved them now I can't even make myself finish them. This makes the second time you've had Raven kidnapped and raped. It made me sick to my stomach to read as far as I did. I think maybe you need to change your stories from Nonhuman to Non consent/Reluctance. It was bad enough that you had her raped before but this time with her being pregnant it was just sick. I would also like to bitch about all that you've put Xavier through first you have him mate Raven without consent them have him almost rape her and now have him in a coma. If you don't like the couple write about someone else.

Please

I acknowledge that some of my writing pisses people off, however, if you have a specific beef about something and can't find anything positive about a chapter, or a posting, please send me a PRIVATE message. And also, if you noticed; Gore STOPPED when Marcus left the room.

It will get better soon. I promise.

to the anonymous person

all stories can't be happy go lucky without any drama to it because frankly that would be boring and i know you would probably complain about that too. Besides it's nonhuman there is always going to be something different about it than your run of the mill story of love and relationships so if you don't like it, STOP READING!!!

Keep writing PLEASE!

I love all of your stories. I have read every one of them. They are great. You have to have the drama to make it interesting or it would be just like my life, BORING. Keep up the great writing. I am pretty sure there is a happy ending somewhere. Can't wait.

grif

like this sos far, but if grif was a were due to a spell, cannot rogue just turn him

I like your stories Ashira, sometimes bad things happen to good people but it is what those people do in spite of the bad that happens to them that defines them and makes them strong. Plus it makes it all that much sweeter when the villain gets what they have coming to them. Don't change your writing, you can't please everyone.

Confusion

As a first time reder of this story I am much confused with all these different people and who they are... It would be better to involve them gradually and not all at once - otherwise I like the story so far!

Why send a private message

This story is fucked up really fucked up

Why Anonymous?

Why can't you claim your comment instead of hiding behind "anonymous"? Coward!