Not the best I have read, but not bad. It could have been longer and a bit more descriptive. It needs resolution. I'd love to read more. Please write another chapter.
@DBRS: Don't be a hater. You don't have to call it garbage if you don't agree with the theme. So what if it is furry? It is still an incest story and is in the right place. I've seen a lot of stories in here tagged incest that aren't or are gay inceest. There is a gay section here too. Would you call a gay incest story garbage too and say it is in the wrong section? Learn a little tolerance.
I loved this story. It is a very nice change from humans to furries. It does, however, need a second part to it. Maybe get the parents involved or something.
this begs for a part2...
as the comment says, this begs for a Part 2, this mixed 2 out of my top 3 favs, Incest and NonHuman...
keep up the good work!!!
Good stuff
You might have wanted to put a easily viewable furry warning though. I do agree with the above though, definitely needs a second part.
I agree
I too say there needs to be a second part.
Wonderful~
I have a sort of interest in furry.. so this was more than just the writing for me. x3 I loved it. Wonderful job : )
Good story
Not the best I have read, but not bad. It could have been longer and a bit more descriptive. It needs resolution. I'd love to read more. Please write another chapter.
@DBRS: Don't be a hater. You don't have to call it garbage if you don't agree with the theme. So what if it is furry? It is still an incest story and is in the right place. I've seen a lot of stories in here tagged incest that aren't or are gay inceest. There is a gay section here too. Would you call a gay incest story garbage too and say it is in the wrong section? Learn a little tolerance.
3 stars
Well written and a pretty good short story. I don't usually care much for furrys but it was good.
Ps. Didn't care much for the ending, usually the sex is last
Loved it!
I loved this story. It is a very nice change from humans to furries. It does, however, need a second part to it. Maybe get the parents involved or something.
a bit different but ... furry ...?
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