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Ali's Art Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/15/10

hot hot hot

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by denverjohn06/15/10

wow you have a way with words. These are unusually hot stories please more. The anticipation to them crossing the line is amazing. Plus to know deep down they both want it so bad too.

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by Paaskonijn05/20/11

Absolutely superb!! Really love the development of the relationship between Ali and Tom. I am glad you don't hurry them into it.

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by island_man12/10/14

another excellent chapter...

brilliant story telling. good sex, but an even better buildup ....

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by Anonymous03/10/15

Beautiful

True erotica

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by Rapier87503/31/15

Loving this so far.

I'm just hoping the following chapters live up to the quality of the first two !

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by Anonymous04/19/16

bah

i can't see nor feel the sexual tension between tom and ali. i only got hard when tom fucked maggie's tits. it doesn't help that there is next to no guilt to what tom and ali are doing, which drives home the pleasure of breaking taboo, and the flimsy dialogue between the two of them.

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