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Weekend Visit Ch. 3

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/16/04

hot

this is hot. get me wet.

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by thrandur08/17/04

hot

...and got me hard

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by Anonymous10/05/04

great

i enjoyed all 3 of the weekend storys needed soma anal tho keep up the great work

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by don8765410/26/04

Needs a continuation

The basis for a continuation is definitely here. Please continue, with the thought in mind that Darren is going to keep visiting every weekend, even with the husband having to go out of town sometimes by himself. That way Darren and her can continue to have their lovemaking sessions, even if she is ovulating.....and of course without birth control.

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by Anonymous10/31/04

Need more!

Very good story, I like it that the husband doesn't talk much.. I really think Darren needs to knock her up.. wouldn't you agree?

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by Anonymous01/28/07

weekend visit ch 4

that jeff ask Darren if he would like to surprise his wife. whil she was sucking his cock, Darren was to cumm up behind her an stick his hard cock inside her. and the story goes on...........?

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by DWornock06/05/11

That was fun.

He needs to rent a motel room and she needs to go shopping. Then they can have more fun.

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by Anonymous12/21/11

DWmoroncock is so stupid

she can't figure out which way the elevator is going with 3 guesses

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by Anonymous02/10/17

Good writing, but different author from previous stories.

The style, language, and feel of the story is way different than previous stories written in the same year. They are NOT written by the same person. This one was very professional with good technique and skill. The first one alphabetically was written by a beginner, and not a skilled one at that. Why the deception ? Get a separate account for the other person. Stopped reading your submissions.

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