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Great but way to short...
nice update on the story can't wait to see what else you write on these two and Lisa and Albert is an interesting pairing
Short, and...
you still could use an editor, but I liked it.
Loved the story
I love the new chapter. I hope you make a story with Albert and Lisa after you finish this one. I hope Jake sister wises up before she get hurt/
nice
this is a nice story. continue please.
please keep going
i hope you have not gave up on the story i really like the new charaters and hope to see the story go on!
KEEP THIS GOING
You've established the characters and this story has SOOOO much potential. Can't wait for the next installment!
Please update!
I hope you decide to eventually finish this story!
The
story can be followed pretty easily, just more editing and the proper words will do this story justice! Keep it up!
I would have hit that little girl with my car for that stinky little attitude
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