thats good but a bit longer would of been better
and u said that he would punish her for being late but was never done unfinished thread there
keep up the good work though i think u can develope it into something really good
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Anonymous07/12/10
non consent
this should be listed in the non-consent category b/c of the rape scene
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thats good but a bit longer would of been better
and u said that he would punish her for being late but was never done unfinished thread there
keep up the good work though i think u can develope it into something really good
non consent
this should be listed in the non-consent category b/c of the rape scene
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