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Fucking Hot
I love it, cant wait to read more.... i am hard as hell just imagining the scene, his hard cock in her ass, oh ya.....
Love this story ...
Hope your working on the next chapter!!! Can't wait
if you love her, LUBE her!
the way it's described sounds way to painful.....no mention of any lube. Come on!!
Anal doesn't count?
The next chapter should be "Oral doesn't count either".
You are finally doing it!
after someone else continued your story in a different direction...guess you have to finish what you started! As of now i havent read this chapter yet, but lets see what you got in store!
cheers.
Thanks for the Feedback!
Thanks for the encouragement and means a lot to know some people enjoyed my story!
@Anon Re: "If you love her, LUBE her!" I really appreciate people's concern for me character's comfort. Some people really feel strongly about this lube issue: more than one person has pointed it out. In response, from my own experience, lube is not always necessary: anal sex without lube can be pleasurable and not painful.
toys?
I think she needs to reach into her nightstand and pull out her vibrator that will soon be feeling pretty lonely. Toys dont count either!
good idea!
@Anon Thanks for the toys idea! I think you're right ;)
Anon e-mail from girl
I always appreciate feedback so feel free to leave it even anonymously....
But Elana who just sent me an anonymous message about how much she liked the story is just torturing me by not leaving any contact info! Please, send me your e-mail, Yahoo msg, or AIM!
I want to talk with anybody but let's be honest I especially want to talk with ladies who like my story: I want to hear about why you like it and what more you want to read. ;)
Sequel ?
Please, give us a sequel for this story, it's very very hot....
I think this could have been one complete story. It just seems like a lot of work for not much story.
Nice!
Please keep this story line going! The character development was good. It's a good plot and I think you would do great with more exploration of the concept. I'm very interested to see how they develop their relationship after having crossed this line. Where does it take them? What do they discover about each other and themselves? What experimentation do they try? I'm eager to read more! Thanks
Fun And Easy to Imagine It Happening
Hi,
I liked this story. Please write more. It was fun to read while tugging my erection. Nice and Easy, because it is not masturbation if you do not cum .... :)
In agree with Tuggen4Mom
It is a great story! Write more of this serie.
Duh, lubricant!!!
No one practiced in the art of anal sex would try it without a lubricant.
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