A single fuck and suddenly we live together. Many of your stories have great story lines and well developed characters. This is rather contrived and implausible.
Can't agree with the preceding comment. I search for and read everything I can find by this author, and I'd put this story in the upper reaches of an astonishingly broad and well-written collection. It brought me back into Savannah, one of my favorite cities, and I think it catches the flavor and the pace of this distinctly southern city wonderfully. But I guess then, if you gauge the "goodness" of a story on how many fucks are in it . . . (And, with a smile, might I mention that SR doesn't often stint on that either?--I see no reason why he can't pull back once in a while with something that changes the emphasis. In fact, I think he's a master at providing us a large world of sensual experiences). One of the things that is different about this story and SR's usual fare, I think, is that it's a Romance. Perhaps the previous commenter just can't leave room in a collection of hundreds of SR stories for a bit of Romance. Too bad.
I don't think you picked the right category for this story. I think you should have put it in the Transsexuals and Crossdressers category; not the Gay Male. I was looking forward to some man on man romance. So, it put me off with all the "she's". And this sentence? "...and played the best set of pert globular breasts a surgeon can give with my hands and my lips and my teeth." It turned me off. I don't want to read about breasts in a gay male story.
Aside from that, though, the story was good. sr71plt, you are a really great writer.
English
Saw it coming...
...but it was fun to get there. :)
Good material!
What a lovely story! If you wanted to rewrite and make it longer, it would be a wonderful novel!
Sweet and creamy
Delicious, sweet snack.
Not your best
A single fuck and suddenly we live together. Many of your stories have great story lines and well developed characters. This is rather contrived and implausible.
Nice!
Quick and to the point! I like that. What a wonderful ending.
Contrary View
Can't agree with the preceding comment. I search for and read everything I can find by this author, and I'd put this story in the upper reaches of an astonishingly broad and well-written collection. It brought me back into Savannah, one of my favorite cities, and I think it catches the flavor and the pace of this distinctly southern city wonderfully. But I guess then, if you gauge the "goodness" of a story on how many fucks are in it . . . (And, with a smile, might I mention that SR doesn't often stint on that either?--I see no reason why he can't pull back once in a while with something that changes the emphasis. In fact, I think he's a master at providing us a large world of sensual experiences). One of the things that is different about this story and SR's usual fare, I think, is that it's a Romance. Perhaps the previous commenter just can't leave room in a collection of hundreds of SR stories for a bit of Romance. Too bad.
Couple Things
I don't think you picked the right category for this story. I think you should have put it in the Transsexuals and Crossdressers category; not the Gay Male. I was looking forward to some man on man romance. So, it put me off with all the "she's". And this sentence? "...and played the best set of pert globular breasts a surgeon can give with my hands and my lips and my teeth." It turned me off. I don't want to read about breasts in a gay male story.
Aside from that, though, the story was good. sr71plt, you are a really great writer.
i agree with the other comment. this isnt gay male.?
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