All Comments on 'Red Under The Moon Ch. 02'

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ajm1250ajm1250almost 14 years ago

Another very good chapter. What's next? Lookinf forward to another chapter soon.

IzkaPlm18IzkaPlm18almost 14 years ago
MORE!!!

More please!!! I finally had time to read the 2nd chapter!!! lol And I loved it!!! PLEASE more! i can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it is not a long wait? Pleaseeeee? :)

So.....is the smith the furry little friend? lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

will there be more soon I hope so looks like its about to get good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Yes more please! I cant wait to see what happens with the hott smith!

jazz13jazz13over 13 years ago

more please! Don't stop writing!

katgoddesskatgoddessover 13 years ago
Good!

But now you need to finish the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Seems a little lackluster...

It's good, but it's nowhere near the first chapter. Kindly continue this series? It has grand potential.

-Blackwind

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good but...

It's really good but I find it really annoying when someone writes something good but they don't finish it keeping everyone who reads it and likes it on their toes. For some reason almost everybody does it and it's really annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More

Please continue writing this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
pwease

please do finish it..i quite like this lil story..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please, oh, please, finish the story!

Absolutely friggin' awesome!! I love the sex and the build up; can't wait for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great!

Please write a Part 3; I'm looking forward to your next chapter very, very much.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 13 years ago
Wow

I really like this story. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story

I love stories about wolfs and this one is great. Please write another chapter, I would love to see this story develope to the point where she will hopefully know who the wolf is and maybe finally marry him. Yes I know I am a sucker for happy endings. But I do love stories about dominating men who take what they want when they wanted and this story with the alpha wolf is great. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more more more more

I love this story and need more chapters. So good.

NecroGirlNecroGirlover 11 years ago

I can't wait to see what you have in mind for the third chapter! This one was such a tease!

drews_lette11drews_lette11over 11 years ago
UNFAIR

HOw could you stop right there? That is so unfair. Please post the next chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please don't stop now

Please don't leave it there what a great story would you please let us know if you're going to continue or not i really hope you will keep writing and that you update red under the moon soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
loved it!

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
why haven't you written?

Why haven't you written? This story is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
sooooo...

Get back to this when tours real life is less ..time consuming.I'll be back to read when you do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

You should have continued this. D: It's very nice and entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Still waiting!!!

It has been just over 4 years now. Are you planning on writing chapter 3 or what? Pretty sad if you don't.

Dat_girlDat_girlalmost 10 years ago
MOOORE

JUST WRITE MORE PLEASE!! 😣

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Please continue this. :3 I would like to read more. :D

LilMissNerd1LilMissNerd1over 8 years ago
Exceptional

It is very common to find stories on this site that are, shall we say, poorly written. It is most pleasing when you find a story, an author, who with only a few words, can paint the most detailed image. I'm truly impressed with your work, and will read your other stories. I do hope you continue this series, as I found being, well, fucked by a lycan quite...titillating.

mermaidminxmermaidminxabout 8 years ago
MORE!!

:) I've read both chapters now and I really love your style. You have something really great with this story so please continue it.

Also ...your portrayal of her frustration and how she gave up was perfect. I'm not sure there's a girl out there who hasn't felt that particular frustration at some point in their life. It added a touch of reality to your story that made it all the better. Bravo.

Care1000Care1000over 7 years ago
Amazing

never have a ever read a story like this, its very refreshing and intriguing. Hope you can continue this series XD

KaradiamoonKaradiamoonalmost 7 years ago
More!

Very good. Erotic! Need more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

I like it so far I think this can be a really great story

GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86over 2 years ago

Seriously? Where is the rest of this story?!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Omg no........where is the rest?!?! It was so good I'm gonna die!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn, safe to say there won’t be a finishing of this. It’s been over 12 years

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