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Wings of Fate Ch. 01

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by Bainsidhe06/18/10

Great start

I like the way you started your story, giving only vague bits of information. that being said, i can't wait for the next chapter.

good luck on your writing

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by Anonymous06/19/10

good start ..more plzzz :)

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by Wolf_girl1306/21/10

great start!!

This story looks promising :) Can't wait to hear more.

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by Anonymous09/05/16

Juvenile

This comes across as a juvenile piece of work, with the characters displaying immature responses. One can only imagine that the author deems it necessary but it adds nothing to the characters.

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