The Ellis Twins - Harlan & Mick

Lose the unnecessary adjectives

"...should I let you suck my huge, dripping cock and swallow my hot, salty come?"
People just don't talk that way! It takes away from the mood...not adds anything.

please continue

we need them to fuck. Hard to type with one hand

Gay

Put the homo crap in the proper category.

Lose the unnecessary adjectives

Thanks for the criticism. Perhaps it didn't come across that they were being humourous :)

Gay

I did warn you :)

That was hot

Please write a second part to this. I want to read about them alone afterward.

More?

More chapters would be appreciated...you're a really talented writer. Girls aren't necessary in this story imo.

It would be great if you continued this story. Do Harlan & Mick hookup when they get home?

Please finish this story. What happens when Harlan & Mick get home? Do they go further?

Great story

I hope you will continue it one day.

Never thought I'd find incest hot

though the story might have done better in Group Sex, we're a more tolerant reader group :-) As well as appreciative of the bisex aspect. And if you let the twins continue the experiment, which I sincerly hope, you'll certainly find fans in GM.

The Ellis Twins - Harlan & Mick (Ch 2) ? :)

Super hot story, so descriptive too :) ch 2 soon please?

Trio

That was a very sensuous story and must be continued. Good descriptions and showing desires. l would like to be part in a similar situation

Sequel!

Hot hot HOT! Absolutely should follow up and further the twins sexual relationship!