You Shouldn't Kiss Me Ch. 01

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I LOVE IT!

I like, I like!

I really enjoyed this. I hope you post the other chapter quickly!

Very good- you've got me.

As an old curmudgeon, I'm not too good in the patience catagory, but this was good enough to make me wait for the rest.

Can't wait to read chapter 2!

Please write the next one soon!

This Is definitly good.

Be looking forward to Chapter Two!

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Excellent

Don't keep us waiting for more!

Excellent

Writing. I couldn't help but think that the first half of the story belonged in Loving Wives. I hate asshole men like the husband. They irritate me like chewing tinfoil or scratching on chalkboards. There are too many women out there that get that kind of treatment by their husbands. I'm glad she kicked him out and took care of her son. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Good Story

God wouldn't I love to give Joe a good ass whippin' or three!! "Men" like him deserve it.

You continue to surprise me...

I thought most of your stories were pretty soft-core; although extremely well written.

You DO have a little bit of 'hard-core' in you! Bravo! Keep the story coming! I'll be here, waiting for all the chapters!

Growl!!!

Man like Joe does exist, unfortunately....... What a shock it must be for Denise to find out her husband is not just cheating SOB but the way he trashed her feelings and their relationship with hurtful words! Her best friend, huh ...........

Glad you write about single parent..... We need more of such story! Keep it up!

whoa!!!

this is good!!! BUT...where is the next chapter??? hmmmm

btw, i love the balls of Denise. Way to go girl!!! :)

so far ....

So good. I really like this story. What there is so far its like real life and some stories don't have that factor. I'm no writer but enjoy a real romance. Keep it going.