I don't mean to be overly critical . . . I just expected "the moment" to be much more . . . climactic (sorry)
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Anonymous09/30/12
please more ...
please continue, write about her reaction and more piercings, a lot more!
by
Anonymous08/23/13
That's just nasty
Without talking to her and without her consent, you permanently mark her. I hope when she wakes up she throws your ass out on the street and files for divorce. What an asshole.
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Looking forward to part 2....
Disappointing
I don't mean to be overly critical . . . I just expected "the moment" to be much more . . . climactic (sorry)
please more ...
please continue, write about her reaction and more piercings, a lot more!
That's just nasty
Without talking to her and without her consent, you permanently mark her. I hope when she wakes up she throws your ass out on the street and files for divorce. What an asshole.
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