"deisatru" is at odds with the concensus on this story which I felt was well written and on an interesting theme.
Perhaps he, or she, would favor us with a submission of their own.
Well I liked it and I think Dee has an effective and entertaining style. It is very easy to nit-pick using words like 'childish', but when we look for something that deisatru
has written, we find no submissions.
Put up or shut up!
How many mothers'd love to hear that from their son, and how many boys'd love to be able to say that to their mom? There's no doubt that lots and lots of them would. Whether they ever admit it to anyone else, or even to themselves, plenty of sons are fascinated by their mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between their mother's legs they came out of, just as many, many mothers hanker to have their darling baby boy up where he started out, now with his big hard cock. And nowadays with the internet crammed with stories of hot motherfucking, lots of it actually takes place in real life. Maybe a mother and son do it only once, to get it out of their system, maybe just a few special times, when the boy turns 18 and 21, maybe every few months just for relief. It's much different with Brian and his mother Ruth in this excellent story. Sure, Brian loves blowing his balls up his mother's warm wet cunt (what son wouldn't?), just as Ruth loves feeling her cunt flooded by her son's rich creamy semen. But this couple is in it for the long haul, for the rest of their lives. They're getting married, and they'll live as husband and wife. Brian's cock will be up his mother's twat more than it's just hanging down over his balls, to his mother's great joy. Her boy's prick will be only for her, just as his mom's twat will be for him alone. A classic love story if there ever was one.
English
Short, sweet, and very erotic.
Great job Dee, as always. Had me hard and cumming.
childish
unrealistic scenes with even more unrealistic dialog.
A lovely read
This was a lovely story. I loved the build-up and the romance.
Keep up the good work.
Disagreement
"deisatru" is at odds with the concensus on this story which I felt was well written and on an interesting theme.
Perhaps he, or she, would favor us with a submission of their own.
Easy to criticise
Well I liked it and I think Dee has an effective and entertaining style. It is very easy to nit-pick using words like 'childish', but when we look for something that deisatru
has written, we find no submissions.
Put up or shut up!
Pudenda, sword ,sheath?????
WTF? Boring shit!
"Momma, I am cumming......right into you."
How many mothers'd love to hear that from their son, and how many boys'd love to be able to say that to their mom? There's no doubt that lots and lots of them would. Whether they ever admit it to anyone else, or even to themselves, plenty of sons are fascinated by their mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between their mother's legs they came out of, just as many, many mothers hanker to have their darling baby boy up where he started out, now with his big hard cock. And nowadays with the internet crammed with stories of hot motherfucking, lots of it actually takes place in real life. Maybe a mother and son do it only once, to get it out of their system, maybe just a few special times, when the boy turns 18 and 21, maybe every few months just for relief. It's much different with Brian and his mother Ruth in this excellent story. Sure, Brian loves blowing his balls up his mother's warm wet cunt (what son wouldn't?), just as Ruth loves feeling her cunt flooded by her son's rich creamy semen. But this couple is in it for the long haul, for the rest of their lives. They're getting married, and they'll live as husband and wife. Brian's cock will be up his mother's twat more than it's just hanging down over his balls, to his mother's great joy. Her boy's prick will be only for her, just as his mom's twat will be for him alone. A classic love story if there ever was one.
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