All Comments on 'Me, My Twin, and The Neighbour'

by RedderElf

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Newsflash

Girls don't have prostates.

photoman001photoman001almost 14 years ago
speeling

Please have someone that can SPELL read your stories before you post. Probably ten mistakes in that with 'through' (for threw) being the worst. Split words that should be one word and in the 3rd to last paragraph the extra word 'clothes'. Proof reading is important too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
POV change?

I got confused, it seemed like there was a narrator change from one of the girls to the guy. It's a lesbian story? So where does the cock come in. It can be called group sex but should probably be categorized as incest/taboo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wrong category

Should have been in incest or Group sex not Lesbian sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

Omg so fucking hot I want to be one of you I was literally rubbing my pussy while reading this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Way to long to read.. but once you got to the spot.. Mmmmmmm :) I couldn't stop touching my self. I gotta take care of this pleasure i need . :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WETNESS!

Oh babe I loved this! Lucky you! My pussy is soaking from reading this! Oh My bf is fucking me gtg!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i agree

My bf sleeping and this was so horny I had to go to the livingroom to touch myself

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wet

My pussy never got so wet before I wanna be fucked real hard right now I'm extra horny

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Women dont have prostates

Girls do not have a prostate, i noticed a couple of times that u wrote he instead of she so im gonna give u the benefit of the doubt and assume u already knew that but u just forgot to rewrite that line when u proofread your changes from bro and sis to twin sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wet wet wet

Got me so wet

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

i came all oer my sister, reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

That made me cum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

That was pretty hot. Def made me cum

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Women don't have prostates.

That kinda ruins it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

So horny

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It sort of lost me when it was talking about the neighbor's Dick hitting the one girl's prostate

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