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The Penny Bridge, West Float

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by PandoraGlitters06/20/10

This poem

mentioned in New Poems Recommendations thread

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo06/20/10

Superb

Very heady piece friday, big smile on Espie's face. I am once again impressed with the way you capture a moment and make it float like a boat in a timeless river.

Thank you for the review PG. I would have missed it, but it hit my email in box, and I had to look. I encourage you to continue the reviews, since my time on lit is less theses days, the reviews get me back again.

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by butters06/20/10

thankyou for posting this for us to read

you take our eyes, our thoughts, and direct them through the scenery of this slice of life, holding up one image after another as contrasts, from emotional state to implication to the visual impacts of size ...

your choice of sounds are compelling, and this leaves a strong after-image resonating in the mind way after the final reading. beautifully crafted.

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by avrgblkgrl06/27/10

You've done it again!

I'm somewhere else and someone else. A needed break! You are my escape.

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by PandoraGlitters07/23/10

Voted

It still says "thank you for your vote" which was 5.

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by twelveoone03/27/11

interesting

look back at childhood, back in the days

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