by always_akima
now i really think i should quit writing cuz i'm not getting a good response....i guess i aint made for it...anyways thanx for keeping it up wit me till now. enjoy guys!!
instead of improving you are too bad in creations and thoughts.minus one of ur reader
i'm really grateful for that comment but it would be a great deal of help if you'd mention where i failed...
I Like this story and can't wait for chapter 10
Never mind what some people say I like it, so please let us have the next chapter.
don't listen to what other people tell you if you like writing keep writing not for them but for you but if it helps i really enjoy your story and i think you should keep pursuing writing
I really love your story, I keep it bookmarked and keep checking back to see if there is another chapter. Keep it up I can't wait to see what happens.
i'm sorry guys but i am quitting writing. i somehow felt i wasnt made for this..and on top i have some personal problems...so if i ever get out of my problem, i shall continue
AKima
please do chapter 10! I read all 9 chapters today and I love this story! It is one of the best I have ever read on this site!
great story! i am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! i agree - write for yourself. when i write it helps me think about whatever i am going through. keep up the great work!
I really do love this story and would love to read much, much, much more of it but if your heart really isn't into it then I will understand. If you are going to stop writing because of someone's callous comments, then don't! If it makes you feel good to write, then write! I hope whatever problems you are having work themselves out. Know this, wether you continue with this story or not I will remain a rabid fan. Good luck and GOD Bless!
I'm sorry you're not going to finish this story. What you have already written is really good. I know there are lots of people who are waiting for the next chapter so please rethink your decision to quit writing.
I am sorry about your personal problems, but this really sucks! It seems every time I get invested in a story the author quits before it is finished. Please reconsider writing, I really loved your story!
i dont understandu make a story that is very good and leave it off @ a part like this? this in my way of putting it is wrong plz finish it
Honestly a lot of writers on this site are crap, poor grammar and command of the language are the least of it. Most couldn't create a unique storyline and set of characters nor write with a decent style. Yes you may have your issues but you've got interesting characters, and I actually care about them. You brought them to life. Very imaginative, that puts you ahead of the game. Please do write more, because the critics (I read the harsh comments) can't write well at all, ill formed thoughts, lack of clarity, and also missing anything constructive. Forget them, everyone has critics, a writer needs to learn to keep at it, even when they want to stop. So what happens next to these two? They must still be active in your mind, let the rest of us know.
I can´t wait for the next chapter, because those stories were absolutly great=)
Please, please reconsider finishing this story... Everyone else probably agrees with me on this; it's just pure torture not knowing how this great story will end.. You are an amazing writer and it is such a shame to see a talent go to waste. Please reconsider?
THIS STORY WAS THE SHIT BUT ENDED TO SOON GIVE ME MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!
Please continue with this marvelous story! I can't get enough, truly a talent, it touched my heart and I'm deeply in love with the plot line, so pure and magical! please! more! Blessings to you :)
You have to finish this story.....it is kick-ass!!! I love the characters and the story line!!! Please, please, PLEASE finish!!!!!!!!!!! :)
The stories have been great and I look for new chapters everyday when I log on please don't leave us hang so close to the end.
Please finish this story. It us awesome and I really want to see what happens next!
If you start a series you should finish it. It was a great one too, but I doubt very much you will finish it.
It's an amazing story.
Don't listen to lesyeuxnoirs.
Every good author has more than one project going at the same time.