All Comments on 'To Be Transformed..or Not? Ch. 09'

by always_akima

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
hi

like where you're taking it. Keep it up!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

We are ready 4 ch 10. Waiting sumwhat patiently.

always_akimaalways_akimaalmost 14 years agoAuthor
ok...

now i really think i should quit writing cuz i'm not getting a good response....i guess i aint made for it...anyways thanx for keeping it up wit me till now. enjoy guys!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
really bad

instead of improving you are too bad in creations and thoughts.minus one of ur reader

always_akimaalways_akimaalmost 14 years agoAuthor
ok''

i'm really grateful for that comment but it would be a great deal of help if you'd mention where i failed...

bearmad1963bearmad1963almost 14 years ago
Great

I Like this story and can't wait for chapter 10

Never mind what some people say I like it, so please let us have the next chapter.

sashayepthatsmesashayepthatsmeover 13 years ago
dont stop

don't listen to what other people tell you if you like writing keep writing not for them but for you but if it helps i really enjoy your story and i think you should keep pursuing writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it

I really love your story, I keep it bookmarked and keep checking back to see if there is another chapter. Keep it up I can't wait to see what happens.

always_akimaalways_akimaover 13 years agoAuthor
i'm sorry

i'm sorry guys but i am quitting writing. i somehow felt i wasnt made for this..and on top i have some personal problems...so if i ever get out of my problem, i shall continue

AKima

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

please do chapter 10! I read all 9 chapters today and I love this story! It is one of the best I have ever read on this site!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
i loved it!

great story! i am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! i agree - write for yourself. when i write it helps me think about whatever i am going through. keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
For you!

I really do love this story and would love to read much, much, much more of it but if your heart really isn't into it then I will understand. If you are going to stop writing because of someone's callous comments, then don't! If it makes you feel good to write, then write! I hope whatever problems you are having work themselves out. Know this, wether you continue with this story or not I will remain a rabid fan. Good luck and GOD Bless!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I'm sorry you're not going to finish this story. What you have already written is really good. I know there are lots of people who are waiting for the next chapter so please rethink your decision to quit writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please Continue

I am sorry about your personal problems, but this really sucks! It seems every time I get invested in a story the author quits before it is finished. Please reconsider writing, I really loved your story!

Mermaid2189Mermaid2189about 13 years ago
Why???!!!!

i dont understandu make a story that is very good and leave it off @ a part like this? this in my way of putting it is wrong plz finish it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I'm picky and I liked it!

Honestly a lot of writers on this site are crap, poor grammar and command of the language are the least of it. Most couldn't create a unique storyline and set of characters nor write with a decent style. Yes you may have your issues but you've got interesting characters, and I actually care about them. You brought them to life. Very imaginative, that puts you ahead of the game. Please do write more, because the critics (I read the harsh comments) can't write well at all, ill formed thoughts, lack of clarity, and also missing anything constructive. Forget them, everyone has critics, a writer needs to learn to keep at it, even when they want to stop. So what happens next to these two? They must still be active in your mind, let the rest of us know.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
fantastic!!!!

I can´t wait for the next chapter, because those stories were absolutly great=)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Please, please reconsider finishing this story... Everyone else probably agrees with me on this; it's just pure torture not knowing how this great story will end.. You are an amazing writer and it is such a shame to see a talent go to waste. Please reconsider?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please write another chapter!

Please! Keep writing chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHAT???????????

THIS STORY WAS THE SHIT BUT ENDED TO SOON GIVE ME MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
MORE!!

Please continue with this marvelous story! I can't get enough, truly a talent, it touched my heart and I'm deeply in love with the plot line, so pure and magical! please! more! Blessings to you :)

ladybug71ladybug71over 12 years ago
Seriously!!!!!

You have to finish this story.....it is kick-ass!!! I love the characters and the story line!!! Please, please, PLEASE finish!!!!!!!!!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
PLEASE GIVE US AND ENDING!!!!!!

The stories have been great and I look for new chapters everyday when I log on please don't leave us hang so close to the end.

caffssucaffssuover 11 years ago
Please comeback!

Please finish this story. It us awesome and I really want to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More Please!!!!!

Please finish the story

lesyeuxnoirslesyeuxnoirsalmost 10 years ago
another sad excuse of a series

If you start a series you should finish it. It was a great one too, but I doubt very much you will finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More.

You done come this far. Don't stop now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I'm hooked!

It's an amazing story.

Don't listen to lesyeuxnoirs.

Every good author has more than one project going at the same time.

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