All Comments on 'Angel on the Stage'

I enjoyed the story from her point of view. Unusual and quite sexy.

Lots of detail, well written and a great story idea. I enjoyed the story.

Super hot!

I hope you do more chapters!

Heck, I’m glad you at least left the voting turned on for your entry!

I read one story that was supposed to be in the contest and when I got to the end they wouldn’t let me vote. How crazy is that? They tell us that it’s we the readers who get to decide the winners and then they pull that on us. Disrespectful is what I’d call it!

The story in question is by some guy named D_K_Moon. Nothing wrong with the story (I was debating whether to give it a 3 - good or 4 – very good) but this guy must think he’s better than every other author in the contest. Some sort of ego trip I guess.

Anyway, mr boxlicker, I thought your story was a very good read and I’d just like to wish you good luck in the contest.

A fan in Idaho

you did an excellent job on this. one of the few stories that didnt involve sex hahaha. you kept people on the edge w/o leading them astray. i hope to see more submssions from you :-)

Beautifully done, BL.

I wonder if there will be a part 2 ?

your words completely substituted for the normal visual of a strip tease perfectly. the anticipation, the tease, the pay-off, it was all there in the words like really being there. You also set this in a left of the norm setting but made it normal rather than odd or disconcerting. That was masterful writing. Well done

I like the way you fearlessly take on such a breadth of subject-matter. You're the consummate all-rounder. This has a lovely flow to it and really draws the reader into the world you create. Well done.

good story, about a heavenly sight-thanks