by TxRad
I really enjoyed your story. I hope you do continue it, as I liked both of the characters. They seemed more real than a lot of the other stories. I hope you keep writing more, whether as more of this story or any other stories you create. I look forward to your next story.
Bainsidhe
The beginning for me, and I hope for you and the story too :)
Aww, how nice! To me, this is just the beginning. It'd be wonderful if you wrote a sequel to this story. Very short, talented, and got me hot and wondering. ; ) Keep up the wonderful work!
I think the beginning of two people in love that can and will last forever but that is just my thoughts about them and the story of true love.
Only you can give your readers the correct answer by writing a follow up story about them and what happens. Does Trish leave with Ed or does she stay and work her jobs. I do hope that you will write somemore about them.I very much enjoyed the story but you really should bring us up to date on them.
Ron. Texas
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Short and sweet,yet left me with lots to think about!
A 5+ for this little gem!
I fell for a whore once, she was not a hooker, just a married fucking whore but I did love her. Her hubby thought she was faithful, I thought she was single, we were both dead wrong....
I found this story on the website and liked it after reading it. Good interaction and reaction between the characters. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Fantastic love story but I think it could use a few more chapter's. Like where do they go from here and why and how do they have that special feeling about each other.
True. Love has no boundaries, When the connection ìs there and both feel it. Just go with it. She is a working girl big deal sometimes to survive you do what you have to do 5 stars. Plus. Not my first time to ŕead it but where do they go from there, I think that it could use at least one more chapter
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com / Ron. Texas
Good short story would make a great romance series. Well written with good character development.
Tx, This is a Wonderful Hot Erotic Romantic story! I hope you are planning on writing more of their story. I have enjoyed reading several of your wonderful stories recently. Thank You!
I don't think this story needs to be continued -- it's complete in and of itself. It could be continued, but I don't understand why you'd want to.
Confusion reigns ?? The mystery tingles my brain. There has to be some answers to my many questions. As in a couple of your other stories, particularly the maze story, there are more questions than answers. Why do you like to dangle these unanswerable plots before us?? Don't doubt that I will continue reading your tales but frustration does take a toll.
I think that the beginning started long ago in a different time and a differen place as for the endng not going to happen they wii be togeather for ever