All Comments on 'Kissing Cassandra Ch. 00'

by fartfalcon

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AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
A good start, young sir, with a couple of verys.

Please keep on- what you've done with this is, as I said, a good start and worth following up. Your plot is good, your descriptions are good and your writing-grammar, punctuation, spelling- is good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Who is Cassandra? I thought the heroine's name was Bethany.

fartfalconfartfalconalmost 14 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

@AzPilot: Thank you for your encouragement, I hope to have Chapter 1 finished and posted by next week.

@Anonymous: I'll be sure to clarify that in Chapter 1

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good Start!

Really enjoyed this story and looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

whos cassandra??

catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
hmm

looks like a good start and as to who cassandra is, i am sure you will tell us at the time of your choice

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

More chapters!?

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
You rotten beggar.!

You have kept us in knots for far too long.

This was a possible good looking series. Please release us.

TMSPTGR3TMSPTGR3over 10 years ago
Kill the Story

A not particularly good story fragment that hasn't been touched since 2010. Take it down.

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