your story is very HOT, would lovr to read more...Thank You your new fan Kelly
Very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
that was great.you got to write a second chapter and get these two together again or anything just keep wtiting
Yay for modeling stories! :) You should definitely write another chapter - I want to see the narrator meet up with Cindy again!
Short and erotic. Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
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WOW!!!!!!!!!
your story is very HOT, would lovr to read more...Thank You your new fan Kelly
Nice job
Very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
awesome
that was great.you got to write a second chapter and get these two together again or anything just keep wtiting
Very hot!
Yay for modeling stories! :)
You should definitely write another chapter - I want to see the narrator meet up with Cindy again!
Nicely done
Short and erotic. Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
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